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1/4/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
nice poem! short and simply put. expressing so much in so few words. i like it! nice use of metaphor as well. good job! keep writing!
1/4/2003 c1 16clifjumpr13
Well, it is definitely short and to the point. Slightly depressing, but that might be just my random interpretation. Pretty good overall. The way you divided the lines was a bit awkward.

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