
7/9/2012 c2 Loves guilt
Good but I like the way the first chapter was set up better but very good so far I like it ... Keep going please ...
Good but I like the way the first chapter was set up better but very good so far I like it ... Keep going please ...
3/17/2005 c2 horsegurl770
this story rocks, it is so awesome, i love it! Is Liadan really that selfish? Not exactly the greatest girl, but, hey, i still love your story. Is she going to get better? Please update asap!
this story rocks, it is so awesome, i love it! Is Liadan really that selfish? Not exactly the greatest girl, but, hey, i still love your story. Is she going to get better? Please update asap!
3/2/2005 c2 one
its 2005 and you have not updated! how cruel to start such a good story and then refuse to develop it. i hope that u will at least update this story after u finish In the Eye of the Tiger (which only needs like one or two chapters). this story is realy god
please update
its 2005 and you have not updated! how cruel to start such a good story and then refuse to develop it. i hope that u will at least update this story after u finish In the Eye of the Tiger (which only needs like one or two chapters). this story is realy god
please update
1/12/2005 c2 sammmy
whoaa this story kicks ass
whoaa this story kicks ass
1/7/2005 c2
3Rose Richonne
That was very good, I really love these first two chapters. Please do not give up on this story and update soon :) I am really exited about it if you couldn't tell already, lol.

That was very good, I really love these first two chapters. Please do not give up on this story and update soon :) I am really exited about it if you couldn't tell already, lol.
12/19/2004 c2
1Faceplate
OMG! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE! and plz don't be like those other authors who like put up 3 chapter and leave it so that every one who reads wouldbe disipointed...i really hate that this is such a good story i don't wanna see it stop in the middle... o0o0o0o wrtie more!
Fp

OMG! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE! and plz don't be like those other authors who like put up 3 chapter and leave it so that every one who reads wouldbe disipointed...i really hate that this is such a good story i don't wanna see it stop in the middle... o0o0o0o wrtie more!
Fp
12/19/2004 c1 Faceplate
o0o0o0o0o0o its so good i can't wait to read the next one i'm going to do it now! lol
o0o0o0o0o0o its so good i can't wait to read the next one i'm going to do it now! lol
10/29/2004 c2
5Maroon
wow i loved it! please continue i know you put this up a while ago but its amazing, i really want to see where this go's!
x

wow i loved it! please continue i know you put this up a while ago but its amazing, i really want to see where this go's!
x
6/21/2004 c2 ShatteredDreamer
this tory has a great plot line to it definately keep writing...u havent updated on any of ur stories lately...i hope u do so soon!
this tory has a great plot line to it definately keep writing...u havent updated on any of ur stories lately...i hope u do so soon!
6/21/2004 c2 Gymkid222
I really love your story, it's descriptive, and i like your characters
update soon!
I really love your story, it's descriptive, and i like your characters
update soon!
1/11/2004 c2
3MadMaverick
Hey, I like it. Especially the Gaelic words(mean, Canain).
It's a good start.

Hey, I like it. Especially the Gaelic words(mean, Canain).
It's a good start.
11/2/2003 c2 Kimmy Koo
This is a very interesting and very well written story, so far anyway. Please update soon.
This is a very interesting and very well written story, so far anyway. Please update soon.