for Liadan and Easbalair10/7/2003 c2 
4Veiled Dicast
MORE, DON'T STOP FOR THE LOVE OF...ANYTHING, DON'T STOP! LOL, THIS IS SO GOOD, UPDATE!
4Veiled DicastMORE, DON'T STOP FOR THE LOVE OF...ANYTHING, DON'T STOP! LOL, THIS IS SO GOOD, UPDATE!
8/1/2003 c1 Indira
I love your writing. It's very original. In case you are interested, I have a few ideas that may spark you to continue this story, but I'll understand if you don't want that since I write stuff too, and it's a matter of pride to accept ideas from other people, but anywho...you have a lot of talent, and I can't wait to read more. till next time
I love your writing. It's very original. In case you are interested, I have a few ideas that may spark you to continue this story, but I'll understand if you don't want that since I write stuff too, and it's a matter of pride to accept ideas from other people, but anywho...you have a lot of talent, and I can't wait to read more. till next time
7/25/2003 c2 Baby Milo
Wow, this is really god! I want the Prince to love Liadan, but her not to love him back... yet anyway. But it's your story and a great one too! So update asap!
Wow, this is really god! I want the Prince to love Liadan, but her not to love him back... yet anyway. But it's your story and a great one too! So update asap!
7/21/2003 c2 14D.M. Ralte
i love the story, i like it as much as u'r other one. i think either narrative (1st of 3rd) is just fine but plz...don't stop writin!
14D.M. Raltei love the story, i like it as much as u'r other one. i think either narrative (1st of 3rd) is just fine but plz...don't stop writin!
7/8/2003 c1 gina
i'm very impressed :)
i read your other story, forget to remember. i don't remember what it was called.. ahh sorry
well. i was very impressed
and i'm very impressed again.
compliments on your other story first.
i've been having some.. er. trouble understanding things that happen in relationships. while i was reading your story i seriously kept thinking DAMN. BAM. SHE GOT IT. you helped things make more sense :D. haa. so thanks for that. you have a lot of amazing insight and i hope it didn't come from personal experience ;D. unless you wouldn't mind all those crazy emotions messin with you. no, i don't think i'm being very clear. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER. i can't think of how else to say it so.. there. amazed by ya. keep it up.
AHH i just read that comment they have at the bottom of the reviewing box. ha a well rounded critique :D. haha no criticisms. and personally i think everyone has their own writing style so not to criticize anyone else but to tell someone to change something is kinda.. silly. good to know so you realize what you have that is different so neccessary but not.. oh. forget it.
impressed. love this and that. i'll look out for more of your writing.
YOU'RE FUGGIN IMPRESSIVE!
i'm very impressed :)
i read your other story, forget to remember. i don't remember what it was called.. ahh sorry
well. i was very impressed
and i'm very impressed again.
compliments on your other story first.
i've been having some.. er. trouble understanding things that happen in relationships. while i was reading your story i seriously kept thinking DAMN. BAM. SHE GOT IT. you helped things make more sense :D. haa. so thanks for that. you have a lot of amazing insight and i hope it didn't come from personal experience ;D. unless you wouldn't mind all those crazy emotions messin with you. no, i don't think i'm being very clear. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER. i can't think of how else to say it so.. there. amazed by ya. keep it up.
AHH i just read that comment they have at the bottom of the reviewing box. ha a well rounded critique :D. haha no criticisms. and personally i think everyone has their own writing style so not to criticize anyone else but to tell someone to change something is kinda.. silly. good to know so you realize what you have that is different so neccessary but not.. oh. forget it.
impressed. love this and that. i'll look out for more of your writing.
YOU'RE FUGGIN IMPRESSIVE!
7/7/2003 c2 8Soleil Antoinette
It is a very interesting story - face paced - I like that! It is a bit confusing to understand, but I guess that is to be expected when you have two different empires from a different world here!
Very nice! Please update soon - and your other story too! :D:D
8Soleil AntoinetteIt is a very interesting story - face paced - I like that! It is a bit confusing to understand, but I guess that is to be expected when you have two different empires from a different world here!
Very nice! Please update soon - and your other story too! :D:D
5/17/2003 c2 ali-kat-29
another good chapter. she needs to find a way to escape, and then they need to treat their people better. please continue!
a.c
another good chapter. she needs to find a way to escape, and then they need to treat their people better. please continue!
a.c
5/3/2003 c2 6Lisa0211
That's where I got the name Liadan too! I love that series, the Sevenwaters Trilogy. I've read all of them. I love the story of Liadan and Bran. It's also where I got Liam's name, a character in my story. Thanks for the Gaelic translations, I only know like 10 words! Great story, keep it up. Post more.
6Lisa0211That's where I got the name Liadan too! I love that series, the Sevenwaters Trilogy. I've read all of them. I love the story of Liadan and Bran. It's also where I got Liam's name, a character in my story. Thanks for the Gaelic translations, I only know like 10 words! Great story, keep it up. Post more.
5/3/2003 c1 Lisa0211
I love the name Liadan. I am going to name my kids that when I grow up! It's so lovely. Oh, and your story is awsome, not just because it has kewl names either! Keep writing.
I love the name Liadan. I am going to name my kids that when I grow up! It's so lovely. Oh, and your story is awsome, not just because it has kewl names either! Keep writing.
4/24/2003 c2 Meeko
oo ^^ good story...
continue
oo ^^ good story...
continue