for PS I Love You7/18/2006 c22 Ebony
lol. i cant belive how much ur uplaoding! its frecken me out. lol. but i lvoe it. how weird. yep that was what htey needed. i still think they need to have more talking but, before this chapter it seemed like they only lusted each other.this chapter changes that butgood work
lol. i cant belive how much ur uplaoding! its frecken me out. lol. but i lvoe it. how weird. yep that was what htey needed. i still think they need to have more talking but, before this chapter it seemed like they only lusted each other.this chapter changes that butgood work
7/18/2006 c21 Ebony
ha ha teasing is such a bitch. lol. good on adam for it but. lol. they have over comet he first step of being awkward around each other. yay. lol.they need romance i recon. and deep and meaningfull. but its hard to write that without draging onany way it was a good chap
ha ha teasing is such a bitch. lol. good on adam for it but. lol. they have over comet he first step of being awkward around each other. yay. lol.they need romance i recon. and deep and meaningfull. but its hard to write that without draging onany way it was a good chap
7/17/2006 c20 Ebony
yer i read adams story, it sounded so inocent but. lol i have a fav quote from this chapter, "she learned that he had more action and less food on his mind." its great. lol. The nick names were funny, like slit, and member. i think that the two might need a bit more conversation going on between them. conversationsa t the begining of relationships are always funny. and fun to right to. but great work it was a very...graphic chap. lol
yer i read adams story, it sounded so inocent but. lol i have a fav quote from this chapter, "she learned that he had more action and less food on his mind." its great. lol. The nick names were funny, like slit, and member. i think that the two might need a bit more conversation going on between them. conversationsa t the begining of relationships are always funny. and fun to right to. but great work it was a very...graphic chap. lol
7/16/2006 c19 Ebony
another loverly update, a bit short though. and kinda weird about the whole getting the other guys in the band to have male love making with adam... hm. lol.talk to u when u next update. love, me
another loverly update, a bit short though. and kinda weird about the whole getting the other guys in the band to have male love making with adam... hm. lol.talk to u when u next update. love, me
7/14/2006 c18 Ebony
aw, how cute. however jamie is such a slut. lol. im so impressed witht eh updates, u must be on a role! i like eveything thus far, great contraversy, however i wouldlike to know the story about nick. that his name right? jamie's ex? any way untill the next updatepeice out
aw, how cute. however jamie is such a slut. lol. im so impressed witht eh updates, u must be on a role! i like eveything thus far, great contraversy, however i wouldlike to know the story about nick. that his name right? jamie's ex? any way untill the next updatepeice out
7/13/2006 c16 ebony
wtf? lol, that was like a totle 360 to what i thought would happen, its well...interesting, it could go many way's, all with massive negitive's and positive's, but jamie is a bit of a minger( if you dont know what htat means its kinda like a trashy scrag)
wtf? lol, that was like a totle 360 to what i thought would happen, its well...interesting, it could go many way's, all with massive negitive's and positive's, but jamie is a bit of a minger( if you dont know what htat means its kinda like a trashy scrag)
7/13/2006 c15 ebony
aw that was a good chapter, wow 2 updates in the one day, i like how they told lucas, it was good coz like, them doing it together stops the true story going astray. any way, i'm gonna read the next chapter now.
aw that was a good chapter, wow 2 updates in the one day, i like how they told lucas, it was good coz like, them doing it together stops the true story going astray. any way, i'm gonna read the next chapter now.
6/29/2006 c14 ebony
what the hell is jamies problem? lol. i would be frustrated, not upset. save upset for when she gets cheated on, or somthign like that. lol. its good that you have added the difficultys of dating someone in a band, coz i recon it would suck with there secedual. but still, im looking forward to more. oh btw, im also random monkeys, its just im to lazy to sign in. lol. read some of my story, tell me what you think
what the hell is jamies problem? lol. i would be frustrated, not upset. save upset for when she gets cheated on, or somthign like that. lol. its good that you have added the difficultys of dating someone in a band, coz i recon it would suck with there secedual. but still, im looking forward to more. oh btw, im also random monkeys, its just im to lazy to sign in. lol. read some of my story, tell me what you think
3/3/2006 c2 alicia
ew. uhm yea im sorry to break it to u. but yea. ur kinda ugly and fat...and based on this story...u think ur all that. ew? the whole damn story is basiclaly "im cool and pretty and guys love me" mmhmm..
ew. uhm yea im sorry to break it to u. but yea. ur kinda ugly and fat...and based on this story...u think ur all that. ew? the whole damn story is basiclaly "im cool and pretty and guys love me" mmhmm..
10/22/2005 c13 
1Nyah4
That is such a cute story. It is very sad, that you are not continueing this. I would really love to read more :)
1Nyah4That is such a cute story. It is very sad, that you are not continueing this. I would really love to read more :)
6/4/2005 c13 ebony
HELLO! FINISH this or die. it is really good!if u need help i would love to give you some sugestions. to contact me my email
HELLO! FINISH this or die. it is really good!if u need help i would love to give you some sugestions. to contact me my email
4/17/2005 c12 Katherine Hesnar
“Adam pulled into the old bowling alley's” which old bowling alley? “The person working the hut was overly friendly towards Adam; we have our suspicions that he was gay.” wow… a bit of pointless info
“Adam pulled into the old bowling alley's” which old bowling alley? “The person working the hut was overly friendly towards Adam; we have our suspicions that he was gay.” wow… a bit of pointless info
4/17/2005 c11 Katherine Hesnar
“ashamed know she thought it “-? What? Dude, capitalization issues! -“deal. honestly” “again the duo said good-bye and hung up the phone”—sounds like you changed POV weird Argh on that sentence! “Jamie and Adam walked outside and got into Adam's car and began the drive to downtown where they would spend the afternoon together. in public.” 3rd person & capitalize the end.
“ashamed know she thought it “-? What? Dude, capitalization issues! -“deal. honestly” “again the duo said good-bye and hung up the phone”—sounds like you changed POV weird Argh on that sentence! “Jamie and Adam walked outside and got into Adam's car and began the drive to downtown where they would spend the afternoon together. in public.” 3rd person & capitalize the end.