for Eden Unforgotten7/19/2003 c1 
8Edana
Oh ::dreamy eyes:: Very nice, I like it a lot. I only have the vaguest idea of what's happening, but that's not important because the most interesting pieces are slightly ambiguous. I really liked the references to Eden. Someone can't let go, and I wonder who he/she is talking to. Anyway, very original, very intriguing and poetic, and I liked it a lot ^_^ This is the kinda thing I wish I could write ^_^;;
8EdanaOh ::dreamy eyes:: Very nice, I like it a lot. I only have the vaguest idea of what's happening, but that's not important because the most interesting pieces are slightly ambiguous. I really liked the references to Eden. Someone can't let go, and I wonder who he/she is talking to. Anyway, very original, very intriguing and poetic, and I liked it a lot ^_^ This is the kinda thing I wish I could write ^_^;;
3/4/2003 c1 16Voodoo Fyrefly
This is posted as a story, and if it is a story, then it's very, very cleverly written. I would pas it off as a poem, but i think this could definitely go places. The title itself if full of eager promises and contradiction. I await more.i think i'm going to like this
~TIO
16Voodoo FyreflyThis is posted as a story, and if it is a story, then it's very, very cleverly written. I would pas it off as a poem, but i think this could definitely go places. The title itself if full of eager promises and contradiction. I await more.i think i'm going to like this
~TIO
1/29/2003 c1 32Arietti
WHOA! That's crazy! But hey-it's good! I like it. You write alot of poetry, I see. Hmm.. I think I'll go read more!*grins*
~Ari
32AriettiWHOA! That's crazy! But hey-it's good! I like it. You write alot of poetry, I see. Hmm.. I think I'll go read more!*grins*
~Ari
1/15/2003 c1 1Elij
Wow! This is different, but quite effective in the way you wrote it. Interesting in that it feels as if it is a lost spiritual being who cannot let go of a gorgeous, blissful past. Very unique piece.
:-)
1ElijWow! This is different, but quite effective in the way you wrote it. Interesting in that it feels as if it is a lost spiritual being who cannot let go of a gorgeous, blissful past. Very unique piece.
:-)
1/6/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Very, very interesting story. Short but interesting. Please keep on writing more.~CT
43Carter TachikawaVery, very interesting story. Short but interesting. Please keep on writing more.~CT
1/5/2003 c1 2BlackVelvetButterfly
that sounds like its written by an angel. That is a cool format. Its good dude. R&R my story if ya want.
2BlackVelvetButterflythat sounds like its written by an angel. That is a cool format. Its good dude. R&R my story if ya want.