for Nanashi1/19/2003 c1 
113tarnished oversoul
That was really cool- you're awesome at writing fantasies Lor- But I would advise a tad of editting be used. I also liked that I got to be in it :) You have to tell me what the assignment was.
Tasch
113tarnished oversoulThat was really cool- you're awesome at writing fantasies Lor- But I would advise a tad of editting be used. I also liked that I got to be in it :) You have to tell me what the assignment was.
Tasch
1/10/2003 c1 Beleg Cuthalion
When I read your first draft, I thought it would end at where the Nataku and Phoenix left. Good thing it didn't. Great myth. A+. Hopefully you'll write more on your own free will. -AJ
When I read your first draft, I thought it would end at where the Nataku and Phoenix left. Good thing it didn't. Great myth. A+. Hopefully you'll write more on your own free will. -AJ