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1/12/2003 c1 16clifjumpr13
I like this. I'm a bit to near unconsciousness at the moment, however this is a very interesting piece, even if the formatting isn't especially easy to read. Just a personal preference, but I'm not a huge fan of the one word lines, though...too choppy for my tastes. But still, I agree with the message you put in this.

Oh, by the way, thanks for the review on 'Come the End' as for whether or not its the big bang or creation...well, I prefer to think of it as both, but my ideas are a bit off the wall. Anyway, hey, if you're feeling generous, I'd appreciate your thoughts on the other stuff I've posted, especially From the Deep.

Enough plug from me, I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I'm going to read more of it.
1/10/2003 c1 Needa S
Bravo!You did a good job putting this together! K/Writing
1/8/2003 c1 Melitta
Beautiful
1/8/2003 c1 Cress Harrison
Wow, reading this really did something to me. Your words are exhilarating and this poem seems so sad, and then so wise. It's fantastic, write more poems soon!

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