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2/16/2003 c1 6JLA-Jade
Ah the blunders of human kind. A little bit implausible in the fact that genetic tampering like that wouldnt be publicized, but plausible is boring. it's a good story, i espeially liked the point of veiw it's told from. btw, thanks for reveiwing my story, the advice helped out! :)
2/11/2003 c1 2BirdTamer
BirdTamer: I HATED YOUR DUMB STORY! I DON'T THINK YOU SHOULD CONTINUE!
1/11/2003 c1 16clifjumpr13
Scientifically, its full of crap.

Literarily, its great. You've picked a great point of view to describe the story from...not the mad scientist or someone absolutely opposed to the creation of said creature, but more of a reluctant admirer of its strengths. I also like the description of your creature. I thoroughly enjoyed it (despite the godzilla (the last one) like overtones) Very curious as to what type of mechanism your monster will use to reproduce. Anyway, I hope you're planning on continuing this one. Drop me an email if you do, its great, though some of the conversation is a bit awkward.

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