for Half and Half1/29/2003 c1 
12restless-wandering
That was coolness. I like it. Good job. I think lots of people can relate :) Keep writing :)
12restless-wanderingThat was coolness. I like it. Good job. I think lots of people can relate :) Keep writing :)
1/14/2003 c1 39Maelan Peredhil
Oooh, very nice. Is this an updated version of the one you sent me on the IM the other day? I like it!
Maelan
39Maelan PeredhilOooh, very nice. Is this an updated version of the one you sent me on the IM the other day? I like it!
Maelan
1/12/2003 c1 hmcoyne
Again - whee - poem! [Points and jumps] Geez, I'm way too hyper...
Hmm - I don't think you can really say your grammar's all that bad - and little kiddie writing certainly not! The creative flare is there, and that's all I cares about hun. If you want a beta reader, I guess I can cope with another one on the boat. [This would be - lol - number seven. And people wonder why I don't update, hehe]
[Shrug] I like betaing - you get to see stories before everyone else [yay!] So, if you want me help, all you gotta do is ask. [Pushes you away] Now, go write some more poems! I *love* the poems!
Again - whee - poem! [Points and jumps] Geez, I'm way too hyper...
Hmm - I don't think you can really say your grammar's all that bad - and little kiddie writing certainly not! The creative flare is there, and that's all I cares about hun. If you want a beta reader, I guess I can cope with another one on the boat. [This would be - lol - number seven. And people wonder why I don't update, hehe]
[Shrug] I like betaing - you get to see stories before everyone else [yay!] So, if you want me help, all you gotta do is ask. [Pushes you away] Now, go write some more poems! I *love* the poems!
1/11/2003 c1 220Namir Swiftpaw
This was good, but your rhyme scheme was confusing me after a while. Did it change? Or am I just tired? O_o The world may never know.
Ah well. Nice work. Keep writing.
~Namir Swiftpaw
220Namir SwiftpawThis was good, but your rhyme scheme was confusing me after a while. Did it change? Or am I just tired? O_o The world may never know.
Ah well. Nice work. Keep writing.
~Namir Swiftpaw
1/11/2003 c1 MillenniumSpirit
Oh, it's good, I love it! So true...I think I'm about to become a fan of your work!
Oh, it's good, I love it! So true...I think I'm about to become a fan of your work!