Just In
for Escape

1/25/2003 c1 8ookami-metsuki
Hey Care! Good poem, keep up the... flow, or something like that.
1/24/2003 c1 gawd
I agree with "..." How many times can you use "in this world" and "escape" in a 7 line poem?I mean, gawd! It sucks. Sorry, but it's the truth!
1/24/2003 c1 Guest
this sucks. i am sorry. this is awful. you say 'this world'four lines out of seven. maybe you should go see a counselor. and ps, watch your language. maybe your mom needs to come wash your mouth out with soap.
1/20/2003 c1 1browneyedguy
pritty, profound and something i can relate to.
1/19/2003 c1 Tallcountrygall48
Your a really good author and I love your poem its so good
1/19/2003 c1 14Tinuwen
*sniffles* Poor caroline! *sniffle* But good poem nonetheless!
1/15/2003 c1 176DefianceIsMe
The feeling of being trapped is horrible. I personally don't like it very much esp when you are trapped alone. Solitary confinement...*shivers* Anyways this has nothing to do with the poem but...Do you like Sailor Moon?
1/15/2003 c1 2Sonata Night
This is great. Sums up how a lot of people feel about themselves. This is wonderful. You capture how you feel in such a short poem.

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