for The Downfall2/25/2005 c1 
8Aby and Levi
Very well written, Obs and Harmony. I now understand the battle you were talking about when you showed me those pictures. Before it had been rather...undistinguished? Indistinguished? I don't know. But very well written.
8Aby and LeviVery well written, Obs and Harmony. I now understand the battle you were talking about when you showed me those pictures. Before it had been rather...undistinguished? Indistinguished? I don't know. But very well written.
7/21/2003 c9 2NthNinth
SakuraCC87 told me to read this story, so i did, and its great! good job on it, but what ever happened to Dakota and people?
2NthNinthSakuraCC87 told me to read this story, so i did, and its great! good job on it, but what ever happened to Dakota and people?
6/17/2003 c5 6Belle the Shadow-Cat
Oh really cool story. I'll read more later, but it's really cool you thought of this world yourself.
-Belle the Shadow-Cat
: EVen the brightest LIght leaves a Shadow::
6Belle the Shadow-CatOh really cool story. I'll read more later, but it's really cool you thought of this world yourself.
-Belle the Shadow-Cat
: EVen the brightest LIght leaves a Shadow::
4/28/2003 c1 5SakuraCC87
Hey like you said before can't review the same chapter twice... thanks for your reviews... and I'm anticipating the rest of Downfall! as well as SotC! My email is and my aim is SakuraCC87 I really hope to hear from you!
5SakuraCC87Hey like you said before can't review the same chapter twice... thanks for your reviews... and I'm anticipating the rest of Downfall! as well as SotC! My email is and my aim is SakuraCC87 I really hope to hear from you!
4/27/2003 c9 SakuraCC87
Hey! I'm returning your review! I spent the whole night reading your story and it's really really good! Hope you continue on with it! Oh, and if you do get SotC published into a book by Tor, do you mind sending me a copy? ;p J/P. but it'd be appreciated if you do send me the whole story!
Hey! I'm returning your review! I spent the whole night reading your story and it's really really good! Hope you continue on with it! Oh, and if you do get SotC published into a book by Tor, do you mind sending me a copy? ;p J/P. but it'd be appreciated if you do send me the whole story!
3/9/2003 c8 5adulaith
You know, giving me little bitty tastes of other things like this doesn not help a reader's health. ::glare:: as usual, mucho goodness, and keep it up, and write more. and. stuff. yeah.
~steen
5adulaithYou know, giving me little bitty tastes of other things like this doesn not help a reader's health. ::glare:: as usual, mucho goodness, and keep it up, and write more. and. stuff. yeah.
~steen
2/28/2003 c7 adulaith
Yay! Moreness! ::laughs insanely:: I have been busy, but I have finally made my way over here and reviewed! Go me! It was, as always, fantastico. And Tor would be severely remiss in not accepting The Son of the Challenger. ::frowns:: They are, however, usually poopy-heads. Bah! Positive thinking! Eh!
Your perseverence inspires me, however. I am off to do more stuff. Tata!
~Steen
Yay! Moreness! ::laughs insanely:: I have been busy, but I have finally made my way over here and reviewed! Go me! It was, as always, fantastico. And Tor would be severely remiss in not accepting The Son of the Challenger. ::frowns:: They are, however, usually poopy-heads. Bah! Positive thinking! Eh!
Your perseverence inspires me, however. I am off to do more stuff. Tata!
~Steen
2/23/2003 c3 14anathalea
i like this chapter! it's really interesting. and i totally envy your imagination. creating a whole world . and writing a whole book. *sigh*
14anathaleai like this chapter! it's really interesting. and i totally envy your imagination. creating a whole world . and writing a whole book. *sigh*
2/5/2003 c4 5adulaith
HMMM! Could a true Jalbaid be... the offspring of TWO JALBAIDS? Or am I making things up? ::shrug:: Oh well! Fantastico as usual! More, I say! More!
~steen!
5adulaithHMMM! Could a true Jalbaid be... the offspring of TWO JALBAIDS? Or am I making things up? ::shrug:: Oh well! Fantastico as usual! More, I say! More!
~steen!
2/5/2003 c1 14anathalea
i think i understood that ... a lil confusing. but really sad :( well written, my compliments
ana
14anathaleai think i understood that ... a lil confusing. but really sad :( well written, my compliments
ana
2/3/2003 c4 1Kimon
This is a very well written story. The glossary does help to explain the terms in the story. The dialogue is good and makes a person feel like they are there. Good description and action throughout.
1KimonThis is a very well written story. The glossary does help to explain the terms in the story. The dialogue is good and makes a person feel like they are there. Good description and action throughout.
1/31/2003 c3 5adulaith
Of course I liked it! ::nods:: I love this story! Hurrah! You know, the only good thing about being sick is I get to stay home and wander around ff.net all day, reading yummy goodness and stuff. So is Dakota a Jalbaid? That's the impression I got. Or maybe he's some other type of magic-enhanced person. I don't know! UPDATE! RAHR! ::meanders off to find a drink:: My throat hurts. ::sniffle:: UPDATE! NOW! BAH! GOODBYE!
~adulaith (steen!)
5adulaithOf course I liked it! ::nods:: I love this story! Hurrah! You know, the only good thing about being sick is I get to stay home and wander around ff.net all day, reading yummy goodness and stuff. So is Dakota a Jalbaid? That's the impression I got. Or maybe he's some other type of magic-enhanced person. I don't know! UPDATE! RAHR! ::meanders off to find a drink:: My throat hurts. ::sniffle:: UPDATE! NOW! BAH! GOODBYE!
~adulaith (steen!)
1/20/2003 c2 adulaith
I'm your only review? ::blink:: People are stupid! They obviously cannot appreciate talent when they happen across it... *muted grumbling* Any chance I might be able to hop on a fic with either of you? I'd love to write something with people who actually know what they are doing *most pointedly does not comment on any of her friends, who are all writing-challenged* Just a hopeful idea! (inore the sad puppy-dog eyes) Anyway, I WANT MORE! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! It's book-quality and tres entertaining. Buenos Noches,
~adulaith
I'm your only review? ::blink:: People are stupid! They obviously cannot appreciate talent when they happen across it... *muted grumbling* Any chance I might be able to hop on a fic with either of you? I'd love to write something with people who actually know what they are doing *most pointedly does not comment on any of her friends, who are all writing-challenged* Just a hopeful idea! (inore the sad puppy-dog eyes) Anyway, I WANT MORE! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! It's book-quality and tres entertaining. Buenos Noches,
~adulaith
1/18/2003 c1 adulaith
Damn! I'm speechless! Maybe I should find myself a co-author. I love to write fantasy, but I can't simply create an entire world in my head, I get too much into detail and leave other things too vague. But this was incredible! Keep it up and continue SOON, I'm putting this on my favorites list. Hurrah!
~adulaith
Damn! I'm speechless! Maybe I should find myself a co-author. I love to write fantasy, but I can't simply create an entire world in my head, I get too much into detail and leave other things too vague. But this was incredible! Keep it up and continue SOON, I'm putting this on my favorites list. Hurrah!
~adulaith