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for The Martian--A tribute to the great Ray Bradbury

12/18/2010 c1 26Sylvara
I wished you developed after that point; that way, it would’ve been more about fantasy and less about horror/mystery. I'm always frustrated and upset when a mystery fiction doesn’t solve its enigmas. Were it not for this so familiarly strong and contradictory feeling of belonging, empathizing, freaking out, the unsatisfied curiosity would nag at me. But the way you brought your fiction is so Bradbury-like that I can't honestly complain.

Congratulations for this piece, and thanks for sharing!
9/20/2004 c1 Moroni's Daughter
This is quite strange, though I thoroughly enjoyed. By the way, I'm changing my pen name to Moroni's Daughter.
2/8/2001 c1 20Sidekickwannabe
I loved it! Your tribute to Ray Bradbury, one of my favorite authors, was very well written. Please keep up the great writing! ^_~
12/3/2000 c1 1BobbtheElf
creepy. It makes you feel like the chick for a minute passively undergoing a slow bizarre transformation. I think you should have described the martian a little more, it'd be even more creepy that way.
11/27/2000 c1 41Willum
Not bad. Saw where it was heading, but not bad.

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