
2/25/2006 c8 dOrKy-GuRl03
well that was a good ending gurl..well at least its a happy ending..well so loving it..can't believe that its the ends already..well anyways going to head out then..so peace out gurl..bye-bye then...
well that was a good ending gurl..well at least its a happy ending..well so loving it..can't believe that its the ends already..well anyways going to head out then..so peace out gurl..bye-bye then...
10/3/2005 c8 NOLONGERPOSTING
I liked the story line, but it was too quick for me. Other than that, I loved the characters and everything! Good job!
I liked the story line, but it was too quick for me. Other than that, I loved the characters and everything! Good job!
7/13/2005 c3 me
this is reminding me way too much of the movie cliffhanger. wonder why...
this is reminding me way too much of the movie cliffhanger. wonder why...
6/7/2005 c8 emerald
aww sweet...but ended too abruptly i think...but anyways it was great!
aww sweet...but ended too abruptly i think...but anyways it was great!
2/28/2004 c8 fire-fem
Very good, although not as good as some of your others, but good none the less. I love all of your stories! They are very well written and they are at a good length.
Very good, although not as good as some of your others, but good none the less. I love all of your stories! They are very well written and they are at a good length.
8/22/2003 c8
1Silver Scaled Dragon
I really like the story-line but I think it goes a bit too fast and some bits aren't long enough. It's not that bad though I enjoyed reading it.

I really like the story-line but I think it goes a bit too fast and some bits aren't long enough. It's not that bad though I enjoyed reading it.
8/19/2003 c8 TheReviewSovereign
This one is good too. This could be turned into a great romance novel. The only thing is that it's too quick into things, and it doesn't have a lot of detail. 6.46 - 10.00
This one is good too. This could be turned into a great romance novel. The only thing is that it's too quick into things, and it doesn't have a lot of detail. 6.46 - 10.00
8/6/2003 c3 bored
to be completely honest,and I don't mean to offend you but,it was kinda boring
to be completely honest,and I don't mean to offend you but,it was kinda boring