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3/14/2004 c1 evergreen
That's a sweet and Ok story. It seems like just something you kind of rushed through. But it's okay.
3 out of 5
xoxo 'doka
9/26/2002 c1 90Dominique Weismiller
How sweet. I wish every jerk who said such nasty things could have the guts to admit their mistakes.
6/6/2002 c1 31amdespot
this story reminds me of myself. i don't really like how rosaline talks back so forcibly though. it doesn't really fit her character. great plot though! :)
12/3/2001 c1 candystarz
okay i guess
11/17/2000 c1 yuffie
kinda sappy, but it's ok
6/27/2000 c1 29Rob
Very good, but mean comments from the girl? anyway, great job, although I can't think of too much to say. I've never really been in such a situation, (I'm more of the lovelorn type) so I can't really sympathise, but I stll liked the story
4/11/2000 c1 Jonathan Urban
Very good and well written, you have a talent!
4/11/2000 c1 Carl Willis
I really enjoyed this story. It sounds as though the story is autobiographical and if it isn't then you really have done well to create that impression.

Very unputdownable, if I can say that.

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