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6/30/2003 c1 63Tormented Romantic
I love this, it was great and very obviously heart-felt. I can completely relate which always makes a piece more fun to read as your feel your heart sink into your stomach remembering. Nicely done, everything flowed well and the ocassional rhyme gave it nice rhythm. Well done and thanks for the review.

-Tormented Romantic-
6/22/2003 c1 Frodo
Beautiful poem. It's great to have someone like that in our lives. Awesome work.

-Frodo
6/15/2003 c1 133S.C. Preclarus Noctis
heh, i only wish i had someone like that. but no,i have to live in some boring city,with friends that dunno how to comfort.
2/2/2003 c1 3jinXed
wow. great poem. i guess you must be writing that to someone who really helped you up after a fall... i get it.
1/26/2003 c1 3KhaosKitten
Wonderful poem...everyone needs someone like that in there life, dont you think?
1/23/2003 c1 xurbandecayx
Very beautiful, I'm glad somebody loves you so much. :)
1/22/2003 c1 176DefianceIsMe
That's so sweet. You're lucky to have sum1 like that. I like the way your poem makes a circle of sorts witht hat line "I couldn't take another day" It really works. GJ. ^_^
1/22/2003 c1 132Sarah Parker
Awwww! *starts to cry* This is the most touching thing I've ever read. It's absolutely beautiful... and perfect, just as you are absolutely beautiful and perfect. I wish I could give you a huge hug right now! But since I can't, I'll settle for a cyber hug (and I'll be sure to send it to the right person.) *HUG!* I love you, and I love this poem! Vanima, amin vanima mela Hez!

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