for Next Time2/4/2003 c1 
68Princess Mulan
Very positive poem! I love how you carry out the whole train of thoughts from giving up to hoping again.
68Princess MulanVery positive poem! I love how you carry out the whole train of thoughts from giving up to hoping again.
1/25/2003 c1 Smiley-Bear
Never, never give up for our goal is usually right in arms reach! Thumbs-up on your piece! Keep writing!
Never, never give up for our goal is usually right in arms reach! Thumbs-up on your piece! Keep writing!
1/25/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Very nice. It is hard when it seems like we failed at something, but we must remember to never give up on what we desire.
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100Very nice. It is hard when it seems like we failed at something, but we must remember to never give up on what we desire.
~Heart of the Sword
1/24/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
nice poem, i'm glad your friend didn't give up. i play piano also, but would never dream of winning a contest, not that i would want to anyway. well, good job on this! keep writing!
36obsidian katananice poem, i'm glad your friend didn't give up. i play piano also, but would never dream of winning a contest, not that i would want to anyway. well, good job on this! keep writing!
1/24/2003 c1 Guest
it's a nice poem! The whole thing seems very honest. Keep on writing!
it's a nice poem! The whole thing seems very honest. Keep on writing!