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12/7/2003 c6 5aiur
WOW those are some of the deepest haikus i have ever seen. omg ... you're awesome at capturing the emotion behind the writing. love it good job!
~k8
7/9/2003 c4 1liquor knight
and kaneko...
7/9/2003 c5 liquor knight
okay. chap 4 and 5...not kanna. Just kagome
7/9/2003 c3 liquor knight
i'm thinking of Kanna from inuyasha in all of these. especially the second. or maybe kaneko
6/6/2003 c5 319ALK214
Well, I think that this whole collection of haiku is very powerful and mood-setting. I like it more than most haiku I read, and it definitely had am effect on me.
5/31/2003 c5 34Smoky Bear
the last one was my favorite... but i loved all of them... xbearx
5/22/2003 c5 Kyalia
Good haikus. Haikus are great, although I'm the world's worst haikuist (I don't think that's a word, but you know what I mean.)
5/21/2003 c4 15Isay
Oh, this one's sweet... ^o^

~Isay
5/21/2003 c3 Isay
Hm, this one's pretty deep too...

~Isay
5/21/2003 c5 Isay
Very deep...

This one's good too..

~Isay
5/21/2003 c2 Isay
That's really sad... but why emotionless eyes when you have a streaming river of tears?

~Isay
5/21/2003 c1 Isay
Wow, it shows the fraility of flowers very nicely...

~Isay
5/13/2003 c4 33Seishinseii
Yo Again!

This would have to be one of my fav Haikus by you. I Love it so much!

=+)Love Ya, Shannon
5/13/2003 c5 Needa S
Beautiful! Spendid job! Thanks for your reviews...
5/8/2003 c1 8glitterjewele
wow, this is an awesome haiku! like 'omega' i loved the feeling of impending doom. this one also had an aura of timelessness about it though, in spite of the flowers dying (how did you do it?). if i had to pick a favorite line out of it . . . "they are not unscathed by time," wins it by a hair. great job!
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