
1/4/2008 c1 Yellow Duvet
Wow, this is so amazing. At first, reading this, I was like 'o.o...' but just wow. So humorous and amusing, nice job. 8)
Wow, this is so amazing. At first, reading this, I was like 'o.o...' but just wow. So humorous and amusing, nice job. 8)
11/6/2007 c1
8bitter-sweet-ana
surprisingly humorous and refreshing! You somehow managed to gush about him without reeking of mushy love. Nice!

surprisingly humorous and refreshing! You somehow managed to gush about him without reeking of mushy love. Nice!
1/23/2004 c1 anon
wonderful poem. by using reverse psychology (haha) you really got me thinking about love and stuff. as in, the stuff people do when they're in love. lol. rock on!
wonderful poem. by using reverse psychology (haha) you really got me thinking about love and stuff. as in, the stuff people do when they're in love. lol. rock on!
12/14/2003 c1
14Dirty Wallpaper
this was a really cool poam, the idea was really entertaining, and on a whole very sweet. though i do have one little thing to say...the first stanza is basically made up with re worded cliches...thought still, very sweet. kudos.

this was a really cool poam, the idea was really entertaining, and on a whole very sweet. though i do have one little thing to say...the first stanza is basically made up with re worded cliches...thought still, very sweet. kudos.
8/6/2003 c1
17fontanellemonster
Oh man that's wonderful...it's something I wish I could've written...

Oh man that's wonderful...it's something I wish I could've written...
1/28/2003 c1 Thistle
Leave it...x
Leave it...x
1/27/2003 c1 Tony
Wow, I am impressed. You are calling Trent your boyfriend. Must be serious. You sound much happier these days. That makes me happy too. Its about time you had something good in your life. Seems like Trent fits that void that you need to have filled. Long may it continue x
Wow, I am impressed. You are calling Trent your boyfriend. Must be serious. You sound much happier these days. That makes me happy too. Its about time you had something good in your life. Seems like Trent fits that void that you need to have filled. Long may it continue x
1/25/2003 c1 Jinx
Wonderful. I love the twist at the end and for once I am practically at a loss of what to say.
Wonderful. I love the twist at the end and for once I am practically at a loss of what to say.