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9/3/2004 c1 11Aiya1
That was... really good. I liked it a lot. It was.. very powerful, for lack of a better word.
11/8/2003 c1 mejaimieme
wow...that was powerful. amazing.
3/23/2003 c1 Colorain
Wow. I really liked that! Was the woman his mother, or just a girlfriend?

Anyway . . . very cool.
3/13/2003 c1 penname0001
wow. Good going, Mel! Loved it, that was really deep!
2/10/2003 c1 5Melusine07
Everyone's been asking me, so yes, he is gay! That's why it says boyfriends! Anyways, thank you all for reveiwing!
2/10/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Wow, this is an amazing piece of work. Dark but lovely.

One question though, the same one the other reviewer had: about his boyfriends, do you mean literally boyfriends (he's gay) or friends? Do did I misinterpret the line completely? (It's possible since I just woke up)

Well, it's excellent. I hope you keep writing^_^

~CT
2/2/2003 c1 Anna Vashdalal
I really like this, especially the line you chose to end it with. I've read it about six times and finally this time I decided to review. You should really write more stuff like this.
1/27/2003 c1 Eponine42
Hey Kat! You rock!
1/26/2003 c1 6SilentBlueRose
Wow. That was great! Good job and keep writing!
1/26/2003 c1 Laure
Wow. Extremely dark and captivating. I usually don't read short stories because they never seem to understand that long stories and short stories should be written differently, but this one...it just leaves you breathless, anxious...

I feel foolish to delve upon this, but...

His boyfriends leave him quickly, his body is getting weaker, and he can’t pay his bills.

His boyfriends? Is that his friends, or is he gay, or is it some term for something I don't understand...
1/25/2003 c1 user75857
Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. Inspirational is more like it...

A very Tennessee Williams-like piece. I'm -very- impressed. I'll have to read more of your work...
1/25/2003 c1 16Doc2
Deep, dark, and very much open to opinion and meaning. I like it a lot.

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