for TITLE :I Dont Have A Title Yet6/22/2006 c4 
4SloanePeterson
Good Story. It's hard for me to read with the language but it's worth it. Way awesome. thanks.
4SloanePetersonGood Story. It's hard for me to read with the language but it's worth it. Way awesome. thanks.
2/1/2003 c4 2timbodi
I like it a lot I just wanted 2 read a bit but I couldnt stopp pllze keep writin
2timbodiI like it a lot I just wanted 2 read a bit but I couldnt stopp pllze keep writin
1/30/2003 c3 modest-goddess
This story is soooooooo good. Finally someone around here that knows how to write. Can't wait to see what happens next.
This story is soooooooo good. Finally someone around here that knows how to write. Can't wait to see what happens next.
1/28/2003 c3 2RazCandi
WHY YOU GOTTA MAKE US WAIT MIKA! WHAT HAPPENED? WHO GOT SHOT UP? AND WHEN DEMARIO GONNA KICK THYE ASS FOR DISTURBING OUR FUCKING?
2RazCandiWHY YOU GOTTA MAKE US WAIT MIKA! WHAT HAPPENED? WHO GOT SHOT UP? AND WHEN DEMARIO GONNA KICK THYE ASS FOR DISTURBING OUR FUCKING?
1/28/2003 c1 RazCandi
MIKA GIRL! FINALLY YOU POSTED IT IM ALEXXXX YALL ME AND MARIO FUCKED ! YEA!VANI NEED TO RIDE J BOOG FACE... *LOL*...MIKA DO THE DAMN THANG...GIRL YOU ONE OF THE TYGHTIEST WRITERS I KNOWS! KEEP IT UP AND POST SOME MO'!:)
MIKA GIRL! FINALLY YOU POSTED IT IM ALEXXXX YALL ME AND MARIO FUCKED ! YEA!VANI NEED TO RIDE J BOOG FACE... *LOL*...MIKA DO THE DAMN THANG...GIRL YOU ONE OF THE TYGHTIEST WRITERS I KNOWS! KEEP IT UP AND POST SOME MO'!:)
1/28/2003 c3 brownsuga1
This storee is off da chainz. I can't wait to see what happenz next...keep it up...
This storee is off da chainz. I can't wait to see what happenz next...keep it up...
1/28/2003 c3 Kenya
Now you KNOW you wrong! This is probably the best chap you done wrote and you gone cut me off like dat! Man! I wanna know who got shot! PLZ! **sniff** The suspense is killin! lol
Now you KNOW you wrong! This is probably the best chap you done wrote and you gone cut me off like dat! Man! I wanna know who got shot! PLZ! **sniff** The suspense is killin! lol
1/25/2003 c1 Kenya
This isa good story and u know how ppl be talkin. I just didnt like the word "Nigga" in there. I'm Black and if u are too then clarify that before u say it. But yo story is good and I"m waiting for the rest!
This isa good story and u know how ppl be talkin. I just didnt like the word "Nigga" in there. I'm Black and if u are too then clarify that before u say it. But yo story is good and I"m waiting for the rest!