2/2/2003 c1 true blue2
it was okay. i think you realy need to work on content, because you have a real talent for writing these sorts of things only they seem to have the same content and the flavour is old my dear. put some real depth into it. you can do better

1/27/2003 c1 34Whitesiren
NIce poem! There I reviewed! Now where's my cookie? :)

Sigh, isn't it hard not to be able to tell what we really feel?

I like how you prayed to the goddess...I don't know why. It's just that most people would usually pray to God and such...

Anywayz...Write more!