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8/8/2013 c1 Domus Vocis
Very well written!
1/19/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
I like the whole theme of this one. I like the way you blended the them into the comparison with the river and ocean...Very Nicely DOne.
2/17/2003 c1 4Hibiscus
Wow, that was excellent. In this economy, I'm surprised yours was the first poem I've read to address this heartache. (Do you live in Oregon? Ha ha, we just have the worst unemployment in the country.)

The lack of capitalization is perfect, and I must admit my heart wrenched through the poem. You've brought the emotions home and with real perspective. I think this is one of the best you've posted.

I love your work and hope you won't mind if I add you to my fave authors.

Good luck and keep writing. Jennifer
2/2/2003 c1 100broken wings241
I feel this poem.
1/30/2003 c1 3Hopes Forgotten
Sad but good.

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