
2/9/2003 c1 RisingBeauty
That's cool. Everyone always writes about getting their heart broken, way to be different and write about the opposite. The rhyming was pretty good, there were a few parts that were confusing, but for the most part it was good. Awesome job.
That's cool. Everyone always writes about getting their heart broken, way to be different and write about the opposite. The rhyming was pretty good, there were a few parts that were confusing, but for the most part it was good. Awesome job.