6/27/2004 c1 1DarkAngelB
I found this on Camaro's favorites list. She only has a few afterall so yours was right at the top. Again with the surprises for me today. I've read a few poems today and I've been surprised with the meaning in them (as tacky and corny as this probably sounds shit I'm writing it and it looks tacky). This reminds me of the author from Invader Zim and how he writes comic books on this one character named Johnny. Talk about insanity. Well anyways just wanted to thank you for letting me think and realize about a few things. ~Salster

2/3/2003 c1 1Camaro
In all my years, I have NEVER read a poem like this. Conflicting ideas is by far my favorite of your poems this far. No the others are impecable, that's true, but let me explain.

You've written this without the delicacy of rhyme. That turns some away from poetry because from a young age we were taught that poetry ryhmed. You've astounded me. I can't even think of how to explain myself.

You have two people talking... TWO! I have NEVER heard of a poem with dialogue.. Maybe I'm absolutely crazy but that has GOT to be the most original, out on a limb, totally nuts idea and yet, I found that SO intriguing and... wow.. from the very start I was hooked by that fact alone.

What's so hard to believe?

Don't you hate yourself

And love your being all at once?

yet another line I'm absolutely enthralled by. And so true.. so true much like the rest. but alas, I'm pawning your review board.. haah.. sorry sorry. I'll go to the next poem.