for Fallen Angels11/1/2003 c1 
29Thirteenth Raven
I loved it. Poor astronauts...the poem described the event and the grief clearly. Great Job :D
29Thirteenth RavenI loved it. Poor astronauts...the poem described the event and the grief clearly. Great Job :D
8/10/2003 c1 12Legless-Catapillar
OK this is definatly very good for a first poem! Like the first stanza, has subtle rhyming and good flow. Oh and thanks for your review. By the way how do you get SO many reviews for all your stuff!
12Legless-CatapillarOK this is definatly very good for a first poem! Like the first stanza, has subtle rhyming and good flow. Oh and thanks for your review. By the way how do you get SO many reviews for all your stuff!
8/4/2003 c1 20midnights shadow
Very good and fitting. Surprised it wasn't "pirated" and put on the internet in an e mail.
20midnights shadowVery good and fitting. Surprised it wasn't "pirated" and put on the internet in an e mail.
7/15/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
Wow, it's almost half a year since that fateful day. It's funny, for even though I never knew any of them, I felt really sad and shocked. And by the looks of this beautiful tribute, you were too. This tribute just goes to show the compassion and goodness of people in today's troubled world. Well done on writing this :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenWow, it's almost half a year since that fateful day. It's funny, for even though I never knew any of them, I felt really sad and shocked. And by the looks of this beautiful tribute, you were too. This tribute just goes to show the compassion and goodness of people in today's troubled world. Well done on writing this :)
*cosmo-queen*
6/14/2003 c1 unforeseen
Wow, that was beautiful! You're a good poet in my opinion! Do keep writing.
God Bless;
-Euro-=-
Wow, that was beautiful! You're a good poet in my opinion! Do keep writing.
God Bless;
-Euro-=-
6/10/2003 c1 35Mime
You've got a big heart to write something like that! I think you should send it to the astronauts' parents, if it isn't too late, really, it's that good!
35MimeYou've got a big heart to write something like that! I think you should send it to the astronauts' parents, if it isn't too late, really, it's that good!
6/6/2003 c1 76CoolBeans18s
This is a wonderful, touching, tragic poem. The they will always be remembered...
~ CoolBeans18s
76CoolBeans18sThis is a wonderful, touching, tragic poem. The they will always be remembered...
~ CoolBeans18s
6/2/2003 c1 The Black Rider
I was bored, so I decided to read some of your early things, so here I go.
This is a wonderful tribute. I remember that day very clearly, for other reasons which I will not divulge into, but I was stricken with that particular piece of information. Anyway, great job once again, and I'm sure they would've loved this.
I was bored, so I decided to read some of your early things, so here I go.
This is a wonderful tribute. I remember that day very clearly, for other reasons which I will not divulge into, but I was stricken with that particular piece of information. Anyway, great job once again, and I'm sure they would've loved this.
5/10/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
wonderful poem, especially for your first! nicely written, i will never forget them as well. it really was a tragedy. well, nice job on this! keep on writing!
36obsidian katanawonderful poem, especially for your first! nicely written, i will never forget them as well. it really was a tragedy. well, nice job on this! keep on writing!
5/5/2003 c1 212VOIDKing Ki
Very good poem, even as it is your first, nice tribute to those who have fallen. Keep writing!
212VOIDKing KiVery good poem, even as it is your first, nice tribute to those who have fallen. Keep writing!
4/10/2003 c1 28ChaoxAngel
What happened to them was so tragic. and like the way you put it - the lives of the seven, are gone forever... They will always be remembered.
~DW
28ChaoxAngelWhat happened to them was so tragic. and like the way you put it - the lives of the seven, are gone forever... They will always be remembered.
~DW