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11/10/2006 c1 14Gilda Brennan
that is very intense! all action, nice fast-pace which never keeps you bored. please continue!
8/9/2006 c2 11Crimson Ara
Why arn't you continuing it, it's a great story. Please please please continue.

-Crimson ara
6/7/2006 c2 borrowedangels
That's intense. Are you going to continue it. I'm curious as to what's going to happen.
12/18/2005 c2 just jin
11/7/2003 c2 Unreal
and ur not updating why?
7/21/2003 c1 8Teresz
interesting and well written, but one thing...the dialouge is confusing. You have it in one big paragrahp, when really, whenever a new speaker is speaking, the paragraph should change. That confused me, but the rest was great.
6/29/2003 c2 DayDreamer123
Please continue! You can't just leave your story like that! Keep going!
6/15/2003 c2 3v33
Good Cliff Hanger! UPDATE SOON!
4/5/2003 c2 Guest
If she was so horny, why couldn't she just have used her hand? it feels just as good...
3/6/2003 c2 TC
Does he beat her? Oh God!
2/27/2003 c2 5DayDreamer731
Great story! The first chapter was a little more graphic than what i'm used to reading but its great all the same. I wish you didn't leave that stupid cliff at the end! I really hope you update soon! Its great! I want to know who the stranger is!

2/26/2003 c2 8the yak
that was a good hanger. i want to know more. UPDATE SOON!
2/26/2003 c1 the yak
that was hot! i liked it a lot
2/23/2003 c2 HS
I hope that's Jamie giving her a birthday present! Update soon!
2/22/2003 c2 C
Not bad.

I liked the second chapter more than the first one becuase it left the reader with something to ponder about.

Update soon.

I read some of the other reviews and I know some people are dying to know what happens.
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