for Lost2/8/2003 c1 
36obsidian katana
great poem! i can relate. i used to feel this way, like there was something missing in my life and i was lost, stumbling through life, but i'm glad i found God. well, nice job! keep writing! and thanks for the review!
36obsidian katanagreat poem! i can relate. i used to feel this way, like there was something missing in my life and i was lost, stumbling through life, but i'm glad i found God. well, nice job! keep writing! and thanks for the review!
2/4/2003 c1 68Princess Mulan
I think this is a wonderful poem as it is. I always have that feeling of I'm missing something, too. I know what you mean. Great poem.
68Princess MulanI think this is a wonderful poem as it is. I always have that feeling of I'm missing something, too. I know what you mean. Great poem.
2/4/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
I think it's great! The line "Smiling up to myself" would sound better "Smiling to myself". This is awesome, though.
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100I think it's great! The line "Smiling up to myself" would sound better "Smiling to myself". This is awesome, though.
~Heart of the Sword