for Fear3/14/2004 c1 
4Domestic bliss
It reminds me of my cousins attempt at suicide. It's very passionate. It reminds me of something Edgar Allan Poe would write. Very well done.
4Domestic blissIt reminds me of my cousins attempt at suicide. It's very passionate. It reminds me of something Edgar Allan Poe would write. Very well done.
9/23/2003 c1 3glitzydancingshoes
Liked it but it sounds a bit like a poem but without all the lines and stuff. What was it you saw? Intersting.
3glitzydancingshoesLiked it but it sounds a bit like a poem but without all the lines and stuff. What was it you saw? Intersting.
6/16/2003 c1 16kaika switched
I liked the writing style in this, and the choice of words. Keep writing!
16kaika switchedI liked the writing style in this, and the choice of words. Keep writing!
4/17/2003 c1 8AresGoddess
hm, what exactly did you witness? sounds bad though. whatever it is that you witnessed i mean, i like how you wrote it.
8AresGoddesshm, what exactly did you witness? sounds bad though. whatever it is that you witnessed i mean, i like how you wrote it.