for Slippage10/6/2006 c1 
31MusicallyBrainwashed
This was a very good story. I'd like to read more if you have more. Also, I'm a bit aware that Julia's parents died in a car crash, but are the parents Martine gave the doctor her real parents who came back from the dead, or step parents? Other than that, nice. Come read my stories anytime. Latersh.
31MusicallyBrainwashedThis was a very good story. I'd like to read more if you have more. Also, I'm a bit aware that Julia's parents died in a car crash, but are the parents Martine gave the doctor her real parents who came back from the dead, or step parents? Other than that, nice. Come read my stories anytime. Latersh.
9/20/2005 c1 Gracey London
Striking beginning. The dialogue was good, the action was interesting, and the whole premise started building suspense right from paragraph one. I hope you decide to continue this story!
G. London
Striking beginning. The dialogue was good, the action was interesting, and the whole premise started building suspense right from paragraph one. I hope you decide to continue this story!
G. London
5/15/2004 c1 9Love and Shadow
i'm confused. i thought julia's parents died in the car crash? how come martine gave her parents' number to the doctor? and i don't understand the last part at all. but it's a good story nonetheless. ^^
~L&S
9Love and Shadowi'm confused. i thought julia's parents died in the car crash? how come martine gave her parents' number to the doctor? and i don't understand the last part at all. but it's a good story nonetheless. ^^
~L&S
2/11/2003 c1 Margo
This story certainly has depth! I am very anxious to read more, please update soon.
This story certainly has depth! I am very anxious to read more, please update soon.
2/10/2003 c1 6April2
Yay, it's up! :] Very good so far, I can't wait for more...there will be more, right?
6April2Yay, it's up! :] Very good so far, I can't wait for more...there will be more, right?
2/8/2003 c1 41Willum
A very well written, and quite mysterious beginning that you have here.
One typo that stands out, Martine tells that Julia was involved in a car accident with her parents, and was the only survivor, but then gives the doctor the phone number of her parents.
Other than that, an interesting story, and one which I hope that you continue with.
41WillumA very well written, and quite mysterious beginning that you have here.
One typo that stands out, Martine tells that Julia was involved in a car accident with her parents, and was the only survivor, but then gives the doctor the phone number of her parents.
Other than that, an interesting story, and one which I hope that you continue with.