for Visions6/10/2003 c2 Sheeba
Wow. Ruins. I love ruins! You have the entire essence of the beauty and age of ruins grounded. It was like walking with her through the ancient temples in Greece or Rome. The story looks interesting! I wish you would continue with it! :)
Wow. Ruins. I love ruins! You have the entire essence of the beauty and age of ruins grounded. It was like walking with her through the ancient temples in Greece or Rome. The story looks interesting! I wish you would continue with it! :)
6/10/2003 c1 Sheeba
Hi! I'm here! I think this has very beautiful and vivid imagery. I can imagine her there in the woods her black hair mingling with the forest trees. It's a beautiful sight! You have a great visual eye. (I suppose like me the ideas come at night for you!) It would make an intriguing story! :)
Hi! I'm here! I think this has very beautiful and vivid imagery. I can imagine her there in the woods her black hair mingling with the forest trees. It's a beautiful sight! You have a great visual eye. (I suppose like me the ideas come at night for you!) It would make an intriguing story! :)
2/22/2003 c2 
3naughty little munchkin
hey ember! me again :)
that was an exactly 2nd 'snippet'? i can't come up with any other word 4 it. u so shud turn one or both of them into a story! i think it would b a great read :) u convey soi much emotion in u're writing!
n e way, keep up the fantastically good work!
luv, nadia
3naughty little munchkinhey ember! me again :)
that was an exactly 2nd 'snippet'? i can't come up with any other word 4 it. u so shud turn one or both of them into a story! i think it would b a great read :) u convey soi much emotion in u're writing!
n e way, keep up the fantastically good work!
luv, nadia
2/8/2003 c1 naughty little munchkin
hey again :)
that was a very pretty description. I liked it! it sounded very mystical and full of ancient magic. I wonder what the next chapter will be like. will it be the same? or from the eyes/thoughts of a diff. character? oh well, wateva u do, i'm sure it'll b fantastic!
luv, nadia
ps - thank u 4 reading my next chapter! i'm glad u liked it.
pps - r u going to continue with u're other stories? i saw that they hadn't been updated in a while.
hey again :)
that was a very pretty description. I liked it! it sounded very mystical and full of ancient magic. I wonder what the next chapter will be like. will it be the same? or from the eyes/thoughts of a diff. character? oh well, wateva u do, i'm sure it'll b fantastic!
luv, nadia
ps - thank u 4 reading my next chapter! i'm glad u liked it.
pps - r u going to continue with u're other stories? i saw that they hadn't been updated in a while.