Reviews: Nice guys finish last

10/20/2004 c1

16Dorian D
Don't you just hate when life works out that way?
This is nicely constructed and flows well.

8/22/2003 c1

109Dakota Alexus
This poem is something i have never read before... it is quick paced and shows emotions that i don't know. It is fantastic.

7/9/2003 c1 kuroi kenshi
(is left speechless) wow! (claps)

3/9/2003 c1 Just Wolf
"Dream of dark things" is such a great line! It was a pretty amazing poem.

3/3/2003 c1

16PotNR
Ya life aint fair sometimes, nice use of metaphors good poem

2/9/2003 c1 Copper Fire
Oh M, that's so sad! And I bet that she doesn't sleep unburdened. And nice guys don't finish last, often times they come in first!

All my love!

~~Copper Fire

2/8/2003 c1 TJ
Hey man, that's deep. I know how ya feel, life's a bitch, huh?

Peace & Love dude