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1/25/2006 c1 41sarah1491
Oh, really good! :)
4/29/2003 c1 4Alaskan-Lone-Wolf
*wow* that was an amazing set of poetry there. You definatly have a way with words..i was captivated by this poem and held by it. I espesially like that last line..beautiful job, and a very nice touch. Please keep it up.

~*~The Goddess of Night~*~
4/2/2003 c1 16Voodoo Fyrefly
Reminds me of Cradle Of Filth in the archaic beauty of the language (and that's a good thing, really) it's refreshing to see a different take on valentine's day...i'm so used to sickly ballads and it's nice to see something totally different. Great job.

~TIO
3/27/2003 c1 33EnigmaticToast
I enjoyed this poem thoroughly! =)

Btw, the "charming beauty" in my poem (The Girl You Did Not Notice) is meant to serve as what all girls have the potential be to someone, somwhere.

Love and Light!,

Ashley
2/17/2003 c1 53Impressionist
it's good.

All the big words seemed to be a tad bit unnessesary to me, almost as if you sat with a thesaurus on your lap, trying to fit in as many words as possible. Which isn't always a bad thing, but make sure you know what they all mean, and use them in the right context. And at that, I think you mostly did. so I commend you for that.

Other than that, I really have nothing more to say. Well done.
2/8/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
*blinks* Wow. Wow. Like I said before, no matter what you write, you amaze nonetheless. A beautifully written poem for Valentine's Day. I think I'll send it to my lover (lol, j/k. But seriously, it's great). I love your vocabulary. Shakespeare would be proud of you too.

Keep it up, dear. Whether you're brutal like in "The God of Minds" or gentle like here, I love you for it.

~CT
2/8/2003 c1 Beckly
Hey, saw this on your website, and boy am I glad to see it posted here! As usual, you've left me speechless- this poem was perfect. Honest. You ended it so amazingly too.

Happy Valentine's Day!

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