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2/17/2003 c1 9Lonestar Sweetheart
Your cousin is lucky that you wrote such a beautiful poem about her!
2/10/2003 c1 33shola
Thats really beautiful
2/10/2003 c1 120Shaman Zel
the recurring last line, (altered but slightly each stanza), is not as powerful as it could be. the second stanza is the greatest.
2/10/2003 c1 Frodo
Nice work. Very complimenting to your cousin. Awesome job. Keep it coming.

-Frodo
2/10/2003 c1 5EarendilBeloved Star
Nicely written. Flows very nicely!:) I like it!:) It sounds as if light shimmers from corners of her face, gleaming from a flicker in her eyes!:)

Really nice, i'm sure your cousin would love to read this!:)

Can you r/r some of mine?

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