for Breathless In The Light2/17/2003 c1 
9Lonestar Sweetheart
Your cousin is lucky that you wrote such a beautiful poem about her!
9Lonestar SweetheartYour cousin is lucky that you wrote such a beautiful poem about her!
2/10/2003 c1 120Shaman Zel
the recurring last line, (altered but slightly each stanza), is not as powerful as it could be. the second stanza is the greatest.
120Shaman Zelthe recurring last line, (altered but slightly each stanza), is not as powerful as it could be. the second stanza is the greatest.
2/10/2003 c1 5EarendilBeloved Star
Nicely written. Flows very nicely!:) I like it!:) It sounds as if light shimmers from corners of her face, gleaming from a flicker in her eyes!:)
Really nice, i'm sure your cousin would love to read this!:)
Can you r/r some of mine?
5EarendilBeloved StarNicely written. Flows very nicely!:) I like it!:) It sounds as if light shimmers from corners of her face, gleaming from a flicker in her eyes!:)
Really nice, i'm sure your cousin would love to read this!:)
Can you r/r some of mine?