for Temptation?12/16/2005 c9 Ashley
aww thats one of the cutest stories I've ever read.
aww thats one of the cutest stories I've ever read.
11/29/2005 c9 dOrKy-GuRl03
hey gurl...that was a good story...to bad that its had end already...can't believe that its the ends...well so loving it..well gotta go now...so peace out then...
hey gurl...that was a good story...to bad that its had end already...can't believe that its the ends...well so loving it..well gotta go now...so peace out then...
5/30/2005 c9 emerald
that was extremely sweet...but i don't think it deserves to get published- sorry and i don't mean any offense...but the story goes really slow at some points-especially the first few chapters and the plot's not that original either...and if you really want to improve it, maybe yo could add some more details about the conversations between those two and display more chemistry between them...for time-pass reading it was definitely adorable but nothing i would add to my book collection...anyways i am going to check out some other fics of yours
that was extremely sweet...but i don't think it deserves to get published- sorry and i don't mean any offense...but the story goes really slow at some points-especially the first few chapters and the plot's not that original either...and if you really want to improve it, maybe yo could add some more details about the conversations between those two and display more chemistry between them...for time-pass reading it was definitely adorable but nothing i would add to my book collection...anyways i am going to check out some other fics of yours
3/4/2003 c9 Kelley
Hey, I loved your story! Such a sweet fic.
Hey, I loved your story! Such a sweet fic.
2/20/2003 c9 
5EditorDee
we're all putting aside college school work, don't worry about it. I loved it! It was sweet, tender and it kept my attention! Keep up the good work! ^.~
5EditorDeewe're all putting aside college school work, don't worry about it. I loved it! It was sweet, tender and it kept my attention! Keep up the good work! ^.~
2/17/2003 c7 Jess
Hope everything will work out! (^_^)
Hope everything will work out! (^_^)