for Boys Typa Fun11/15/2018 c20 yesss
adorable great story keep going i love them
adorable great story keep going i love them
10/19/2013 c5 Prodigee123
sounds interesting, good girl gone bad finds herself in army(navy) very original.
sounds interesting, good girl gone bad finds herself in army(navy) very original.
8/18/2012 c31 AnonymousReads
This story had an amazing different type of plot i dont exactly understand joe though. I thought the pace you set was good and i have read more rushed endings so it wasnt too bad. Great story. :)
This story had an amazing different type of plot i dont exactly understand joe though. I thought the pace you set was good and i have read more rushed endings so it wasnt too bad. Great story. :)
10/30/2011 c31 rdkelly
cool read this
http:/www.fictionpress.com/s/2852452/1/Good_Different_or_Bad_Different
cool read this
http:/www.fictionpress.com/s/2852452/1/Good_Different_or_Bad_Different
10/21/2011 c30 spUNkyORanGE
I really enjoyed this story. Their relationship was really cute and I like how they "hated" each other at first and then loved each other. The story I think was rushed a little too quickly towards the end. The story of the bad guy Harles or Marlow or whatever, I dont think you gave him good enough background as the killer. I didnt really understand why he was doing what he was doing. Or why he was a bad guy exactly. I think it was more of a read between the lines sort of thing - which is not the end of the word but I think he left more questions than answers. But overall I really enjoyed the story. I would read a sequel for sure if there was one. :)
I really enjoyed this story. Their relationship was really cute and I like how they "hated" each other at first and then loved each other. The story I think was rushed a little too quickly towards the end. The story of the bad guy Harles or Marlow or whatever, I dont think you gave him good enough background as the killer. I didnt really understand why he was doing what he was doing. Or why he was a bad guy exactly. I think it was more of a read between the lines sort of thing - which is not the end of the word but I think he left more questions than answers. But overall I really enjoyed the story. I would read a sequel for sure if there was one. :)
6/30/2011 c31 Tanya Max
The build up of the story was gradual but really addictive, I especially love the part when Abby met up with the rest of Corin's family and when they get ready for action against the enemy. Sure there were some missing words, spelling errors but overall it was fluent, the story was able to move seamlessly though I find their growth in friendship a little weird *breaths* if it works, it works. The ending is what everyone's looking forward to but I guess you know that it is a little abrupt but then again, no sense dragging it...unless you're thinking of throwing them into another harrowing adventure, I would damn well look forward to that! Maybe something that makes use of Abby's intellect and knowledge. Ah, I wrote so much, thanks for writing and keep writing!
The build up of the story was gradual but really addictive, I especially love the part when Abby met up with the rest of Corin's family and when they get ready for action against the enemy. Sure there were some missing words, spelling errors but overall it was fluent, the story was able to move seamlessly though I find their growth in friendship a little weird *breaths* if it works, it works. The ending is what everyone's looking forward to but I guess you know that it is a little abrupt but then again, no sense dragging it...unless you're thinking of throwing them into another harrowing adventure, I would damn well look forward to that! Maybe something that makes use of Abby's intellect and knowledge. Ah, I wrote so much, thanks for writing and keep writing!
5/19/2011 c30 Kelly Rogala
I really enjoyed this story! I wish I could find a Navy SEAL :) Can't wait to read more of your work!
I really enjoyed this story! I wish I could find a Navy SEAL :) Can't wait to read more of your work!
12/4/2010 c30 
2SmilingSarcasm
I read it all in one night lol, I am tired as hell, but the story was worth it! I absolutely loved it! I think Corin is GREAT! Anywho, I think your a great writer, so imma add you to my fav authors =p haha
2SmilingSarcasmI read it all in one night lol, I am tired as hell, but the story was worth it! I absolutely loved it! I think Corin is GREAT! Anywho, I think your a great writer, so imma add you to my fav authors =p haha
11/28/2010 c23 samishort
OMGSH this is getting so much better drama adventure and romance ek this is my kind of story
OMGSH this is getting so much better drama adventure and romance ek this is my kind of story
11/28/2010 c1 samishort
first of all i know im only on chap 1 but its pretty good so far it has caught my interest and for people to be mad at u for spending more time on one story thn another is rude they should be thanking u for even writing all ur stories on this so tht they can read ... god ... i hate mean people hehehehe well anyhoo good job and dont listen to the mean ones
first of all i know im only on chap 1 but its pretty good so far it has caught my interest and for people to be mad at u for spending more time on one story thn another is rude they should be thanking u for even writing all ur stories on this so tht they can read ... god ... i hate mean people hehehehe well anyhoo good job and dont listen to the mean ones