for Fyre and Sword
12/19/2003 c1 anon
The story right now seems a litle confusing (to me). If the story is taking place in Scotland, maybe you could incorporate more into the setting and the culture of the scots, especially remembering the time period you are writing in and the kind of things that would be common/wouldn't be common.
The story right now seems a litle confusing (to me). If the story is taking place in Scotland, maybe you could incorporate more into the setting and the culture of the scots, especially remembering the time period you are writing in and the kind of things that would be common/wouldn't be common.