for Mika and the Children4/15/2003 c1 
16Threshie
ROFLMAO! ^^; That's so Mika and so me... LOL! It's great! I wanna see the part where Couy and Acire hafta take the kids out to the park/beach! ^^;;
J/k-any part with Acire and Couy and the rest of the zany cast runnin' 'round is gonna be funny. ^^;; Can ya tell I've been writin' about Mitch again? Heh.
Very kawaii! Ja matta for now!
-Threshie ^^V
16ThreshieROFLMAO! ^^; That's so Mika and so me... LOL! It's great! I wanna see the part where Couy and Acire hafta take the kids out to the park/beach! ^^;;
J/k-any part with Acire and Couy and the rest of the zany cast runnin' 'round is gonna be funny. ^^;; Can ya tell I've been writin' about Mitch again? Heh.
Very kawaii! Ja matta for now!
-Threshie ^^V
2/13/2003 c1 7John Ink
I think perhaps it should be written in story form rather than script format. I say this only because of all the little * in the first chapter. Being only the first chapter I'm judging, I could be wrong. I like what you have set up so far. The characters sound real. A few technical errors, but I'm not one to be talking. All around a good start. I hope to see more.
7John InkI think perhaps it should be written in story form rather than script format. I say this only because of all the little * in the first chapter. Being only the first chapter I'm judging, I could be wrong. I like what you have set up so far. The characters sound real. A few technical errors, but I'm not one to be talking. All around a good start. I hope to see more.