for Immortality6/19/2006 c2 Pecan
Lovely chapter. Poor Chigaru, though. :| Hmm.. things are getting interesting! :)
Lovely chapter. Poor Chigaru, though. :| Hmm.. things are getting interesting! :)
6/19/2006 c1 SKoW Awards
Congratulations, Apple Nasty!
Your story, Immortality, has been nominated at Some Kind of Wonderful Romance Awards (SKoW Awards) for Best Fantasy/Sci-Fi (Complete). Keep up the great work!
-Jenina
freewebs.com/skow
Congratulations, Apple Nasty!
Your story, Immortality, has been nominated at Some Kind of Wonderful Romance Awards (SKoW Awards) for Best Fantasy/Sci-Fi (Complete). Keep up the great work!
-Jenina
freewebs.com/skow
4/20/2006 c16 Sam
For such a exceptional story, I personally would never expect you getting only 300 such reviews. The chapters were very long, and not alot of authors now-a-days. and the reason you have such a small amount of reviews, is that back in the time when fictionpress wasn't as well developed, there wasn't many people on it, and probally all the people on fic.press was probably reading you story.
I really do hope hope you get yourself a publisher, and just wow, the story left my mouth hanging. lol
p.s.: r u going to write another story...
and I would have never guessed
For such a exceptional story, I personally would never expect you getting only 300 such reviews. The chapters were very long, and not alot of authors now-a-days. and the reason you have such a small amount of reviews, is that back in the time when fictionpress wasn't as well developed, there wasn't many people on it, and probally all the people on fic.press was probably reading you story.
I really do hope hope you get yourself a publisher, and just wow, the story left my mouth hanging. lol
p.s.: r u going to write another story...
and I would have never guessed
9/4/2005 c9 sai-chan
HA! i knew it i knew it! i knew that he wasnt dead~ wow i sound so braggy and bratty -_- but i was so excited, i knew you had something planned, and i was waiting for the moment that it was revealed that he wasn't dead, thank you for writing to my expectations... not that it would you less of a writer if you didnt..
HA! i knew it i knew it! i knew that he wasnt dead~ wow i sound so braggy and bratty -_- but i was so excited, i knew you had something planned, and i was waiting for the moment that it was revealed that he wasn't dead, thank you for writing to my expectations... not that it would you less of a writer if you didnt..
7/27/2005 c12 azzizarukas
ur such a good writer i dont kno why more people didnt review! i find it rare to read a story of this quality, strong characters and one of those plots that never quite lets u stop guessing...i'm proud to make this review #350!
ur such a good writer i dont kno why more people didnt review! i find it rare to read a story of this quality, strong characters and one of those plots that never quite lets u stop guessing...i'm proud to make this review #350!
7/24/2005 c16 
15Melika Elena
Very nice story. Imaginative, exciting, and the perfect pace, it was a pleasure to read.
However, some of the phrases used by the characters were modern, so you may want to edit some. (Such as "okay" and things like that).
A romantic at heart, I would've liked it in plain language that Bomani and Haqikah, but (shrugs), I suppose that's what reading in between the lines are for.
Can't wait to read more of your work!
15Melika ElenaVery nice story. Imaginative, exciting, and the perfect pace, it was a pleasure to read.
However, some of the phrases used by the characters were modern, so you may want to edit some. (Such as "okay" and things like that).
A romantic at heart, I would've liked it in plain language that Bomani and Haqikah, but (shrugs), I suppose that's what reading in between the lines are for.
Can't wait to read more of your work!
4/19/2005 c10 IntentionallyLeftBlank
hey!
usually I would do this only at the end of the story, but unfortunately, it is much too late for me to continue... maybe I could spare another hour?...
Sanura was my favorite character. I hated it when she died. Assassins (especially Asian ones) are cool people, and the idea of an honorable one with morals and a heart is an idea I am considering developing.
you are very awesome, and I will continue reading this tomorrow... or really, later today.
damn i'm tired... oh well
bye.
hey!
usually I would do this only at the end of the story, but unfortunately, it is much too late for me to continue... maybe I could spare another hour?...
Sanura was my favorite character. I hated it when she died. Assassins (especially Asian ones) are cool people, and the idea of an honorable one with morals and a heart is an idea I am considering developing.
you are very awesome, and I will continue reading this tomorrow... or really, later today.
damn i'm tired... oh well
bye.
3/21/2005 c16 LuvDragons not signed in
Ok, if you ever publish, please let me know so that I can buy the book. I would like to know where it's selling too please. Just leave me a review on my account here ("LuvDragons" doesn't matter which story) or my other account at FFN: ("LuvFantasy" again, whihchever story doesn't matter). Please publish this, and when you do; let me know, please! If you do, you'll know that you will be recieving at least one buyer (i.e. me)!
Ok, if you ever publish, please let me know so that I can buy the book. I would like to know where it's selling too please. Just leave me a review on my account here ("LuvDragons" doesn't matter which story) or my other account at FFN: ("LuvFantasy" again, whihchever story doesn't matter). Please publish this, and when you do; let me know, please! If you do, you'll know that you will be recieving at least one buyer (i.e. me)!
3/11/2005 c1 5lool
OMFG! I read this story before, and I lost the link, and now I found it! Yay! I love it, its amazing. =] =] =]
5loolOMFG! I read this story before, and I lost the link, and now I found it! Yay! I love it, its amazing. =] =] =]
1/30/2005 c3 Natasha Starsong
this is all i can review for today, your chapters are really long. But I really like it so far, it's very special and cool. However it seems weird. If he's the son of Horus, how come the Pharaoh's his father? and isn't Seth a very evil, vengeful god? not like her at all.
this is all i can review for today, your chapters are really long. But I really like it so far, it's very special and cool. However it seems weird. If he's the son of Horus, how come the Pharaoh's his father? and isn't Seth a very evil, vengeful god? not like her at all.
1/5/2005 c15 cinnamonsweet08
Oh, I loved this story SO much. I really think it made me feel better as well. This was marvelous, real grand. I loved it. I admire the patience you must have had to write this, and at sixteen as well! Wow. I'm utterly impressed. Fabulous job.
~Miss Maia
Keep writing. I can't wait to read more of your works.
Oh, I loved this story SO much. I really think it made me feel better as well. This was marvelous, real grand. I loved it. I admire the patience you must have had to write this, and at sixteen as well! Wow. I'm utterly impressed. Fabulous job.
~Miss Maia
Keep writing. I can't wait to read more of your works.
1/5/2005 c5 cinnamonsweet08
Okay- so I read up to Chapter 5 yesterday while I was home sick and then Daddy made me go to sleep. This thing is ADDICTIVE! I love the fast paced movement; it really appeals to me. I'm plannin' on finishin' it today. EXCELLENT!
~Miss Maia
Okay- so I read up to Chapter 5 yesterday while I was home sick and then Daddy made me go to sleep. This thing is ADDICTIVE! I love the fast paced movement; it really appeals to me. I'm plannin' on finishin' it today. EXCELLENT!
~Miss Maia