for Noon2/16/2003 c1 
3Seul Desir
Okay. I have not read your fanfiction, but here is why I haven't: It's INTIMIDATING! lol. make paragraphs, seperate your work. I took one look at this and automatically decided not to read. Just a pointer to get more people to read!
3Seul DesirOkay. I have not read your fanfiction, but here is why I haven't: It's INTIMIDATING! lol. make paragraphs, seperate your work. I took one look at this and automatically decided not to read. Just a pointer to get more people to read!