
5/24/2003 c1
7Firebird
That's a very poignant and beautiful poem. I agree with the last reviewer that it would make a great story...but it's also a great piece to stand on it's own. Very interesting idea and your writing flows very smoothly. Great job!

That's a very poignant and beautiful poem. I agree with the last reviewer that it would make a great story...but it's also a great piece to stand on it's own. Very interesting idea and your writing flows very smoothly. Great job!
2/16/2003 c1
12Terra Tigra
Wow, this is really great. The idea here is really original and refreshing. This could be a really great story.
Very nice job! Thumbs!
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-

Wow, this is really great. The idea here is really original and refreshing. This could be a really great story.
Very nice job! Thumbs!
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-