for Goodbye5/7/2003 c1 
36obsidian katana
very sad and sweet! wonderful piece, i like it. great job! keep on writing!
36obsidian katanavery sad and sweet! wonderful piece, i like it. great job! keep on writing!
5/5/2003 c1 212VOIDKing Ki
I can just imagine Tidus and Yuna as I read this. FFX was wonderful and you did a grand job of putting feelings to words. Keep writing!
212VOIDKing KiI can just imagine Tidus and Yuna as I read this. FFX was wonderful and you did a grand job of putting feelings to words. Keep writing!
3/21/2003 c1 124Penumbra
my goodness, you are talented, aren't you? ^_^ i really love this. and ff10! keep writing! :)
124Penumbramy goodness, you are talented, aren't you? ^_^ i really love this. and ff10! keep writing! :)
3/15/2003 c1 64not sure yet
this is far from bad i think, its very beautiful, as all your poems tend to be, and has a mournful yet loving feel throughout the whole thing that i just adore, wonderful poem
64not sure yetthis is far from bad i think, its very beautiful, as all your poems tend to be, and has a mournful yet loving feel throughout the whole thing that i just adore, wonderful poem
3/14/2003 c1 The Black Rider
This isn't bad at all. It's quite beautiful, if you ask me. Keep up the good work.
This isn't bad at all. It's quite beautiful, if you ask me. Keep up the good work.
3/13/2003 c1 128Zainab
It didn't make that much sense, but the main idea is still given. Besides, the ones that aren't straight-forward are the best ones (in my opinion) Another well-written piece
128ZainabIt didn't make that much sense, but the main idea is still given. Besides, the ones that aren't straight-forward are the best ones (in my opinion) Another well-written piece
3/9/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
I put about sixty hours into FFX and then it ended up having that ending. *sigh* At least we know that FFX-2 is coming out. This was a really great piece. I wrote a poem about this also, it was called "Wings of Courage" and posted on FFNET. That was the first time a game almost made me cry. *sniff* It gets me everytime.
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100I put about sixty hours into FFX and then it ended up having that ending. *sigh* At least we know that FFX-2 is coming out. This was a really great piece. I wrote a poem about this also, it was called "Wings of Courage" and posted on FFNET. That was the first time a game almost made me cry. *sniff* It gets me everytime.
~Heart of the Sword
3/6/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
It makes sense! It's very pretty and very sad. Now I really want to play FFX, lol. Anyway, a very good poem. Keep it up.~CT
43Carter TachikawaIt makes sense! It's very pretty and very sad. Now I really want to play FFX, lol. Anyway, a very good poem. Keep it up.~CT
2/28/2003 c1 7whitesoul
this is so sad.
worst than my undeletable past fic.
angst to the max.
yet i have a strong mind.and i shall not cry.
goodbye your love?
wonder who that is?
hehehe let me guess.could it be * ** *
maybe not
oh caress my cheek
[naik bulu roma ku] so the seducing if i m right?
anyway nicely done.
do write more about you love so i can get a better idea. hehehe
7whitesoulthis is so sad.
worst than my undeletable past fic.
angst to the max.
yet i have a strong mind.and i shall not cry.
goodbye your love?
wonder who that is?
hehehe let me guess.could it be * ** *
maybe not
oh caress my cheek
[naik bulu roma ku] so the seducing if i m right?
anyway nicely done.
do write more about you love so i can get a better idea. hehehe
2/26/2003 c1 145True Illusion
that's good! i like that one. i've never played ffx, but i'm obsessed with all the final fantasy and i gotta admit, ffx looks real good. thankys for the review. i don't know if i'll do many more haikus but thanks anywhoz. keep up the greatness!
145True Illusionthat's good! i like that one. i've never played ffx, but i'm obsessed with all the final fantasy and i gotta admit, ffx looks real good. thankys for the review. i don't know if i'll do many more haikus but thanks anywhoz. keep up the greatness!