for Persuading the Pigs8/9/2006 c1 
3Caness
I cannot begin to describe this, but... this poem made me cry. Beautiful rhythm, wonderful flow. My poetry group will revel in this piece as I shall print it out shortly and show them. You are amazing.
3CanessI cannot begin to describe this, but... this poem made me cry. Beautiful rhythm, wonderful flow. My poetry group will revel in this piece as I shall print it out shortly and show them. You are amazing.
10/27/2005 c1 55The Watched
The first stanza of this was absolutely amazing, the rest, whilst not quite the same, was still brilliant. I also loved the stanza about "everything's moving a millisecond too fast" and the main chorus.
No, actually, I loved ALL of it.
Even though I don't know why I'm reviewing this, adding my name to the list a full two years after it was written although I don't know if you're going to even see this review...But either way, I loved it, I really did. And whether you see this or not, that's as much a legacy as anything.
55The WatchedThe first stanza of this was absolutely amazing, the rest, whilst not quite the same, was still brilliant. I also loved the stanza about "everything's moving a millisecond too fast" and the main chorus.
No, actually, I loved ALL of it.
Even though I don't know why I'm reviewing this, adding my name to the list a full two years after it was written although I don't know if you're going to even see this review...But either way, I loved it, I really did. And whether you see this or not, that's as much a legacy as anything.
6/20/2004 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
The phrasing and words are fantastically odd. It seems to stop too soon, but maybe that's because I was waiting for a point when there really isn't one, which is why, as I reread it, I get this twisted little grin. I thought that "who're" should have been "who are," and that the line "tryng to decipher the truth from the lines" was a little cliche, but I couldn't think of anything else that would fit. You have the kind of work that has this vibe of finality, if you know what I mean. Like what you see is what you get and that's it.
-Jess
123breakdown in the waiting roomThe phrasing and words are fantastically odd. It seems to stop too soon, but maybe that's because I was waiting for a point when there really isn't one, which is why, as I reread it, I get this twisted little grin. I thought that "who're" should have been "who are," and that the line "tryng to decipher the truth from the lines" was a little cliche, but I couldn't think of anything else that would fit. You have the kind of work that has this vibe of finality, if you know what I mean. Like what you see is what you get and that's it.
-Jess
9/17/2003 c1 romancingthemoon
it's one of those poems that after you read a few times, you still don't get...i give up. i like pigs. i wish they could fly.
maybe i'm missing the point.
or AM i?
it's one of those poems that after you read a few times, you still don't get...i give up. i like pigs. i wish they could fly.
maybe i'm missing the point.
or AM i?
3/19/2003 c1 4Iris Olin
That was interesting.It made sense but it didn't.Keep up the good work.
With Love
*Iris Olin*
4Iris OlinThat was interesting.It made sense but it didn't.Keep up the good work.
With Love
*Iris Olin*
3/14/2003 c1 9carterxoxo
that was awseome talk about flowing. you got a gift. i wish i was as pretty as thoughs pretty guys who arent even hot there just beutiful. thanx for broadening my horizon.
9carterxoxothat was awseome talk about flowing. you got a gift. i wish i was as pretty as thoughs pretty guys who arent even hot there just beutiful. thanx for broadening my horizon.
2/18/2003 c1 GoodbyeDeleteThisPage
You never cease to amaze me. I don't see how you do it! You always write something so incredibly weird and so symbolic. I like the stanza that you repeat and I especially like the line "persuading the pigs to fly." Wonderful title by the way. :) You seriously are my favorite author on this site. I do not flatter you, I speak the truth. I can't wait to read more. :)
-Oriana
Amadis
ps. I saw the the lovely thank you note. Thank you, but you are the one whose brillance should be comended. Thank you.
You never cease to amaze me. I don't see how you do it! You always write something so incredibly weird and so symbolic. I like the stanza that you repeat and I especially like the line "persuading the pigs to fly." Wonderful title by the way. :) You seriously are my favorite author on this site. I do not flatter you, I speak the truth. I can't wait to read more. :)
-Oriana
Amadis
ps. I saw the the lovely thank you note. Thank you, but you are the one whose brillance should be comended. Thank you.
2/18/2003 c1 Wrong Name Tag
Awesome song. Love the phrasing and it has a very poetic feel to it. Great job, I'll try and check out some more of your work later.
~jessie
Awesome song. Love the phrasing and it has a very poetic feel to it. Great job, I'll try and check out some more of your work later.
~jessie