for Window and Glass2/19/2003 c1 alex
hey, good story. but kind of confusing. it seems like you're trying to get a quasi urban mod feeling going with the story. it kind of makes it mysterious, which i admire
keep writing!
hey, good story. but kind of confusing. it seems like you're trying to get a quasi urban mod feeling going with the story. it kind of makes it mysterious, which i admire
keep writing!
2/18/2003 c1 Sicilienne
After reading this piece, I was left speechless. It was one of the most well-written stories on this site, full of imagery and emotion generally lacking in the fics here. Keep writing, because I really want to know what's going to happen next. Until then, I'll be happy putting this story under my favorites list.
-Skye
After reading this piece, I was left speechless. It was one of the most well-written stories on this site, full of imagery and emotion generally lacking in the fics here. Keep writing, because I really want to know what's going to happen next. Until then, I'll be happy putting this story under my favorites list.
-Skye
2/18/2003 c1 
12SeeYaPancho
You are an excellent writer. I say that not because your story was entertaining (many are) or because I'm looking to flatter you so you can "check my stuff out". I say it because it's the truth. There are few good writers on this site and you're an excellent one. Keep up the good work.
12SeeYaPanchoYou are an excellent writer. I say that not because your story was entertaining (many are) or because I'm looking to flatter you so you can "check my stuff out". I say it because it's the truth. There are few good writers on this site and you're an excellent one. Keep up the good work.
2/18/2003 c1 Nooneatall
I love the way you are telling this story. The descriptions are so original, they put a wonderful picture in my head. I don't have a thing to complain about, please continue!
-Raven
I love the way you are telling this story. The descriptions are so original, they put a wonderful picture in my head. I don't have a thing to complain about, please continue!
-Raven