for Nature's Family2/20/2003 c1 
11Free Soul
Wow i really really loved this poem. This is so true, and i'm so glad you decided to share this with me. You are so very talented and this is amazing.wow. I wish i could write something like this. Wonderfully done. :)
11Free SoulWow i really really loved this poem. This is so true, and i'm so glad you decided to share this with me. You are so very talented and this is amazing.wow. I wish i could write something like this. Wonderfully done. :)
2/19/2003 c1 Balancing Act
Uh. . . if you asked me to describe Nature, I wouldn't say "happy", I'd say. . . lethal, ruthless, beautiful, dangerous. . . but it's your poem, and a rather good one, too. The adjective "happy" just doesn't seem to belong.
Oh, yes, and why are some lines together and others separate? Unusual. . .
Uh. . . if you asked me to describe Nature, I wouldn't say "happy", I'd say. . . lethal, ruthless, beautiful, dangerous. . . but it's your poem, and a rather good one, too. The adjective "happy" just doesn't seem to belong.
Oh, yes, and why are some lines together and others separate? Unusual. . .
2/19/2003 c1 3blue raindrop
impressive for a young writer! Nicely written. I'm filipina too! ^_^ If you can, pls. read my poems.
3blue raindropimpressive for a young writer! Nicely written. I'm filipina too! ^_^ If you can, pls. read my poems.