for On a balcony7/6/2014 c11 A.Collins
I definitely feel like you could have fleshed the entire story our a bit more to give it some background and depth. I enjoyed it still, don't get me wrong. I love fluff.
I definitely feel like you could have fleshed the entire story our a bit more to give it some background and depth. I enjoyed it still, don't get me wrong. I love fluff.
3/6/2012 c11 
4R. Ficst
fun fun fun ^_^
at the end, the character development seemed a bit fast, but I enjoyed the ride. fun story : )
4R. Ficstfun fun fun ^_^
at the end, the character development seemed a bit fast, but I enjoyed the ride. fun story : )
7/11/2010 c11 20purplehost
You neglected to mark your story as complete. But yes, the ending was satisfactory.
20purplehostYou neglected to mark your story as complete. But yes, the ending was satisfactory.
1/30/2009 c11 i-see-faeries
Happy ending? Awesome. I like this, really. It's vaguely random, vaguely pointless, but not really. I love it! Wonderful job.
Happy ending? Awesome. I like this, really. It's vaguely random, vaguely pointless, but not really. I love it! Wonderful job.
4/1/2008 c11 firedraygon97
Hee, very cute fic! Ten is a bit stalker-ish and creepy, keeping tabs on John for 2 years, haha. But it just shows his...determination to win. Great work with this!
~fd97
Hee, very cute fic! Ten is a bit stalker-ish and creepy, keeping tabs on John for 2 years, haha. But it just shows his...determination to win. Great work with this!
~fd97
5/19/2007 c11 Gran
I just wished to say that I first read this when it was published on and i'm really happy to find it again...
I loved it, despite it's many plotholes: I think it is a romantic, well-written piece, and the characters are very well defined...
So thank you for hours of enjoyment!
Should you ever need a beta... ;)
I just wished to say that I first read this when it was published on and i'm really happy to find it again...
I loved it, despite it's many plotholes: I think it is a romantic, well-written piece, and the characters are very well defined...
So thank you for hours of enjoyment!
Should you ever need a beta... ;)
3/18/2007 c11 31emptyword
I will not say I understood most of their conversation and the subtle back-and-forth hesitations; I probably followed about half of it, and that's being generous. But one thing I think I'm able to get: those two are very well-created characters, and, given their quirks, their relationship is and probably will often be on ever-shifting grounds.
That had to make no sense. At any rate, this was magnificent.
31emptywordI will not say I understood most of their conversation and the subtle back-and-forth hesitations; I probably followed about half of it, and that's being generous. But one thing I think I'm able to get: those two are very well-created characters, and, given their quirks, their relationship is and probably will often be on ever-shifting grounds.
That had to make no sense. At any rate, this was magnificent.
1/21/2007 c11 Green Eyed Pixie
great story ^_^ I thought that the whole plot was awesome, and i loved John, Ten and Clarice =] Hope you write more work like it =]
great story ^_^ I thought that the whole plot was awesome, and i loved John, Ten and Clarice =] Hope you write more work like it =]
1/3/2007 c7 Midnights Scream
and the plot thickens!:) I'm saorry I couldn't help myself. I like this story a lot and what makes it better is Ten didn't just randomly pick John and that's the only thing that bother me about the story. Very good.
and the plot thickens!:) I'm saorry I couldn't help myself. I like this story a lot and what makes it better is Ten didn't just randomly pick John and that's the only thing that bother me about the story. Very good.
5/22/2006 c11 Lidyah
I just love the writing - your english was so fun to read. :)
I just love the writing - your english was so fun to read. :)