for Forever Love6/30/2009 c15 
1LightWhereTheSunDontShine
Yea! Another happy ending! Enless you think of what they losed but everyone was happy in the end!
1LightWhereTheSunDontShineYea! Another happy ending! Enless you think of what they losed but everyone was happy in the end!
6/30/2009 c12 LightWhereTheSunDontShine
Ah! Stupid K! I'm totally against slavery and anyone for it! Poor Adam! You better keep him alive! Any ways, continue soon!
Ah! Stupid K! I'm totally against slavery and anyone for it! Poor Adam! You better keep him alive! Any ways, continue soon!
6/30/2009 c10 LightWhereTheSunDontShine
Is there any more war people for them to run into? Timmy is the last one right? And why can't he see a doctor?
Is there any more war people for them to run into? Timmy is the last one right? And why can't he see a doctor?
6/30/2009 c1 LightWhereTheSunDontShine
First chapter and Im already crying again! Can't wait to read the rest!
First chapter and Im already crying again! Can't wait to read the rest!
5/22/2003 c15 12Sierra Nicole
The last bit of this chapter was a little confusing, as it seemed to skip time quite quickly. I almost thought it was going to end up being just a dream of Jessica's, but apparently it wasn't. Did we lose a few paragraphs? Just wondering, because your continuity has never been this jolty before.
~Sierra
12Sierra NicoleThe last bit of this chapter was a little confusing, as it seemed to skip time quite quickly. I almost thought it was going to end up being just a dream of Jessica's, but apparently it wasn't. Did we lose a few paragraphs? Just wondering, because your continuity has never been this jolty before.
~Sierra
5/13/2003 c15 cmar
Another satisfying ending. Looking forward to more stories from you.
Another satisfying ending. Looking forward to more stories from you.
5/10/2003 c14 cmar
Again, very good, good action scene, but I would have liked it a little longer. But maybe it's realistic that it was over so quickly.
Keep up the good work!
Again, very good, good action scene, but I would have liked it a little longer. But maybe it's realistic that it was over so quickly.
Keep up the good work!
5/5/2003 c13 Sierra Nicole
Once again, it's been a while since I checked over here, and look at all these new chapters! Wow. Keep up the good work.
~Sierra
Once again, it's been a while since I checked over here, and look at all these new chapters! Wow. Keep up the good work.
~Sierra
4/27/2003 c13 cmar
Interesting plot development, I'm curious to see where you go with it.
I'm sure there's going to be trouble...
Interesting plot development, I'm curious to see where you go with it.
I'm sure there's going to be trouble...
4/6/2003 c11 Falcon2
Keep going- this is good!
Keep going- this is good!
4/5/2003 c11 cmar
Very enjoyable, Jesse seems like an interesting characters, and I hope to see him again.
Very enjoyable, Jesse seems like an interesting characters, and I hope to see him again.
4/3/2003 c10 cmar
Very interesting, can't wait to see more.
Very interesting, can't wait to see more.
3/30/2003 c1 Gold Enchantress
*sighs* I should've known that their happiness couldn't last forever; that it would be one day be torn. If only love could conquer all. But the only thing love surely can't conquer is the very force that had plagued the lives of everyone in the United States in the early 1860s: death. To think Dan had spent four years of his life staring death in the face, watching it suck at the lives of his comrades, as they bled to death before his very eyes. And now it's come to claim him.
The only bright to this is that he has now joined the beloved friends he lost during the war. (Hey, I'm trying to be optimistic here.)
*sighs* I should've known that their happiness couldn't last forever; that it would be one day be torn. If only love could conquer all. But the only thing love surely can't conquer is the very force that had plagued the lives of everyone in the United States in the early 1860s: death. To think Dan had spent four years of his life staring death in the face, watching it suck at the lives of his comrades, as they bled to death before his very eyes. And now it's come to claim him.
The only bright to this is that he has now joined the beloved friends he lost during the war. (Hey, I'm trying to be optimistic here.)
3/30/2003 c9 cmar
That was really good, well paced and thoughtful.
Happy, but sad too. Waiting to see how this turns out.
That was really good, well paced and thoughtful.
Happy, but sad too. Waiting to see how this turns out.