for Wergelt4/30/2021 c1 ambethiiii
Not to be overreacting but you're book is totally awesome. You're innate writing skill is what the world should witness. Try joining NovelStar's writing competition because why not? Here's the link if you want to.
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Not to be overreacting but you're book is totally awesome. You're innate writing skill is what the world should witness. Try joining NovelStar's writing competition because why not? Here's the link if you want to.
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4/5/2006 c1 
50Kristina Suko
That was a little confusing, but very intense, and pretty good for being a dream- interesting.
50Kristina SukoThat was a little confusing, but very intense, and pretty good for being a dream- interesting.
12/9/2005 c1 4nightymorning
:D Oo! I liked it. It was really interesting, and fun. Full of action. Liked. -thumbs up-
4nightymorning:D Oo! I liked it. It was really interesting, and fun. Full of action. Liked. -thumbs up-
8/24/2005 c1 17Abbreviations
A very cool short story with well written combat. Kept my interest through to the very end, something that is pretty hard to do, great job.
- Abbreviations, Open Up My Eager Eyes
17AbbreviationsA very cool short story with well written combat. Kept my interest through to the very end, something that is pretty hard to do, great job.
- Abbreviations, Open Up My Eager Eyes
8/3/2005 c1 11Leylique Morrow
I got a little lost toward the end there. By the time I got to the knives, the only thing registering in my brain was "zombies in a bar...blood everywhere...what kind of psycho has dreams like this?" I don't fully understand what Chaco and Marilee have to do with anything. Judging by your other reviews, I'm the only confused one here. Oh my.
-Leila
11Leylique MorrowI got a little lost toward the end there. By the time I got to the knives, the only thing registering in my brain was "zombies in a bar...blood everywhere...what kind of psycho has dreams like this?" I don't fully understand what Chaco and Marilee have to do with anything. Judging by your other reviews, I'm the only confused one here. Oh my.
-Leila
7/14/2005 c1 93Nienyalie
Wow. Very exciting, it's like an explosion in my mind to read. The way it moves very quickly, it's very compressed. Wonderful.
93NienyalieWow. Very exciting, it's like an explosion in my mind to read. The way it moves very quickly, it's very compressed. Wonderful.
12/30/2003 c1 Sulkdodds
I wish I had dreams like that. While the writing is slightly confusing, it's an excellently spun yarn. Good description and a cracking pace makes me want to read more and more.
I wish I had dreams like that. While the writing is slightly confusing, it's an excellently spun yarn. Good description and a cracking pace makes me want to read more and more.
3/10/2003 c1 3Sulia Shincho
Very well written. Nice use of details, not over loaded with description or lack of. You really know what you're writing, which is actually rare to be honest. This is quite the story, real capitivating. Keep this up.
-Sulia Shincho-
3Sulia ShinchoVery well written. Nice use of details, not over loaded with description or lack of. You really know what you're writing, which is actually rare to be honest. This is quite the story, real capitivating. Keep this up.
-Sulia Shincho-