for Fragments Against the Ruins8/7/2006 c1 
21insane in the brain
I like it! However, it's just a personal preference of mine (and I have a massive headache right now), usually, double spacing lines on Fiction Press gives your chapters a neater look/feel.
It might not be right by formal standards but...
I should shut up _
21insane in the brainI like it! However, it's just a personal preference of mine (and I have a massive headache right now), usually, double spacing lines on Fiction Press gives your chapters a neater look/feel.
It might not be right by formal standards but...
I should shut up _
10/15/2005 c1 11les petits bateaux
Wow...you have a very beautiful way of expressing the words. This is an amazing piece. I hope you continue with it.
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxWow...you have a very beautiful way of expressing the words. This is an amazing piece. I hope you continue with it.
~~Trinity
2/10/2005 c1 Lou xxx
Wow, I love it already! Please continue!
Wow, I love it already! Please continue!
11/25/2004 c1 verus pax
Very neat and nice, but there were a few spelling errors here and there. I like the story, although it's a bit short. Hope you continue.-pax
Very neat and nice, but there were a few spelling errors here and there. I like the story, although it's a bit short. Hope you continue.-pax
9/13/2003 c1 2Jennifer H. Westall
I enjoy your writing. I can get lost in imagining the story rather than noticing the language or the style, or the lack of either. I hope I can read more of your work.
2Jennifer H. WestallI enjoy your writing. I can get lost in imagining the story rather than noticing the language or the style, or the lack of either. I hope I can read more of your work.