for Blade and Blood4/17/2003 c1 
47Skivverus
No objections to rhyming it. Rhythm seems like it's not quite there yet after the first two lines, though. It's a good start, though. Rhyming poetry can be harder to pull off, but it can also be more rewarding in the end.
47SkivverusNo objections to rhyming it. Rhythm seems like it's not quite there yet after the first two lines, though. It's a good start, though. Rhyming poetry can be harder to pull off, but it can also be more rewarding in the end.
4/6/2003 c1 No Longer Posting Here
very interesting. i don't know about anyone else who read this, but i truly loved it...even though it did rhyme.
very interesting. i don't know about anyone else who read this, but i truly loved it...even though it did rhyme.