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2/16/2005 c1 594JoyfullyStruggling
very nice, short and simple. i like it
5/2/2003 c1 80Plato's Optic Runaway
REALLY REALLY GREAT!
4/17/2003 c1 47Skivverus
No objections to rhyming it. Rhythm seems like it's not quite there yet after the first two lines, though. It's a good start, though. Rhyming poetry can be harder to pull off, but it can also be more rewarding in the end.
4/6/2003 c1 No Longer Posting Here
very interesting. i don't know about anyone else who read this, but i truly loved it...even though it did rhyme.

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