for Tearstains on the Bedsheets8/11/2003 c4 Dark Hamadryad
I am NEVER falling behind on your fics again. EVER! BTW: Great story. I like it.
~Luna
I am NEVER falling behind on your fics again. EVER! BTW: Great story. I like it.
~Luna
7/14/2003 c5 The Black Rider
I'm sorry I didn't keep up with this story like I should've, because it is really good. Not only do you write beautifully, as always, but you capture the angst like a trout on a fishing hook. Strange simile, I know, but this is how I felt. Keep writing.
I'm sorry I didn't keep up with this story like I should've, because it is really good. Not only do you write beautifully, as always, but you capture the angst like a trout on a fishing hook. Strange simile, I know, but this is how I felt. Keep writing.
6/26/2003 c5 GrungeIsDead
Yay! I won't have to do what I threatened to do! Hee hee! It was a joke Lyria, I hope you know that. I wouldn't have done it! Nice chapter, a bit confusing, other than that, great! I loved it!
Yay! I won't have to do what I threatened to do! Hee hee! It was a joke Lyria, I hope you know that. I wouldn't have done it! Nice chapter, a bit confusing, other than that, great! I loved it!
6/25/2003 c5 lostinscotland
::sits and gapes::
...ok...um...::tries to recover from shock:: great goodness! what have you done? ai! wow...
er...yeah. dunno quite what to say here. except...oh, my goodness, i can't believe it! how horrible! poor eve! poor rocky! poor everyone! ahh! ::bursts into tears and cries for hours::
yeah, ok...really great chapter. heart-wrenching. keep writing like that. just...maybe every other chapter? i don't think i can take too much of that in steady succession...yikes.
::sits and gapes::
...ok...um...::tries to recover from shock:: great goodness! what have you done? ai! wow...
er...yeah. dunno quite what to say here. except...oh, my goodness, i can't believe it! how horrible! poor eve! poor rocky! poor everyone! ahh! ::bursts into tears and cries for hours::
yeah, ok...really great chapter. heart-wrenching. keep writing like that. just...maybe every other chapter? i don't think i can take too much of that in steady succession...yikes.
5/23/2003 c4 Dismantled Reflection
Yay! You had the name 'Ebony' in it!
*clears throat* Hey, I like this. I like the sense of friendship between the three. Kinda reminds me of my fic. O.o I'd like to see where this goes, keep it up!
~ Ebony.
Yay! You had the name 'Ebony' in it!
*clears throat* Hey, I like this. I like the sense of friendship between the three. Kinda reminds me of my fic. O.o I'd like to see where this goes, keep it up!
~ Ebony.
5/21/2003 c4 
20Starlight Rain
I'm so sorry it took me so long to review these next three chapters! They really were wonderful! I especially love the character of Rocky and his relationship to Eve. And... *bright, glistening tears form in her eyes* I swear I caught my breath when I saw how you used my name. I feel so honored!
Keep writing! I can't wait to see what comes next!
~~Starlight Rain (Marley)
20Starlight RainI'm so sorry it took me so long to review these next three chapters! They really were wonderful! I especially love the character of Rocky and his relationship to Eve. And... *bright, glistening tears form in her eyes* I swear I caught my breath when I saw how you used my name. I feel so honored!
Keep writing! I can't wait to see what comes next!
~~Starlight Rain (Marley)
5/21/2003 c4 13evm
Continue, Continue, continue!This is so good, I think the best thing about it is the characters! You built them really well, and as you're reading, you feel like you really know them. Rocky is the best of all! He so cool...*drools*. I like the names you used too. All of them were great!Also, that was sweet of you to stick Marley's name in there! You must really like her stuff.
-Amberose
13evmContinue, Continue, continue!This is so good, I think the best thing about it is the characters! You built them really well, and as you're reading, you feel like you really know them. Rocky is the best of all! He so cool...*drools*. I like the names you used too. All of them were great!Also, that was sweet of you to stick Marley's name in there! You must really like her stuff.
-Amberose
5/11/2003 c3 GrungeIsDead
I forgot to add something when I reiewed on Chapter 4. U said that Cameron was gay, and that he could never have kids. Gay people can't have kids? Oh well... Bye i g2g... see you later, bye!
I forgot to add something when I reiewed on Chapter 4. U said that Cameron was gay, and that he could never have kids. Gay people can't have kids? Oh well... Bye i g2g... see you later, bye!
5/11/2003 c4 GrungeIsDead
Wow Sal, I never knew that you would swear in your stories. I always thought that you were a kind gentle person... But you still are... anyways that was awesome, I'm really glad you finally got it up, please get Chapter 5 up soon! :D Oh yes, I think you should change the rating. (just to warn other people) It was really awesome though!
Amme1212
Wow Sal, I never knew that you would swear in your stories. I always thought that you were a kind gentle person... But you still are... anyways that was awesome, I'm really glad you finally got it up, please get Chapter 5 up soon! :D Oh yes, I think you should change the rating. (just to warn other people) It was really awesome though!
Amme1212
5/7/2003 c1 David Maxwell
WOW! This is the best poem Sal has ever written. I quite agree that people like Eve are bullied every day, for their money, anything!
Very moving and complete.
VG
WOW! This is the best poem Sal has ever written. I quite agree that people like Eve are bullied every day, for their money, anything!
Very moving and complete.
VG
5/4/2003 c3 12Silverlight Elf
Luke... *Droolz*... Yummy sounding! I want him I want him! Well.. its your story... lol! I like!
12Silverlight ElfLuke... *Droolz*... Yummy sounding! I want him I want him! Well.. its your story... lol! I like!